Question

短文改错，详细理由，为什么错

高中英语短文改错，10个，大小写不算，在线
i often quarrel about my mother over whether i can watch tv after school . she holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons . it seems to me that once i am allowed to do that , i'll unable to control myself and forget all about my study . she also thinks it is bad for my eye . but i really can't accept her ideas . in my opinion , watch tv can set my mind at rest after a day's hard works . besides , it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad . thus , we shouldn 't be forbidden to watch tv .要详细理由，谢谢了

Answer 1

1.about 改成with 与...某人争论 2. view 前面加 the 3. fully 改成full make full use of 充分利用...
4.i 和 am 调换位置... once 是状语 状语提前 需要半倒装 5.eye 改成eyes 双眼 6.ideas 改成idea 它是不可数名词。7.watch 改成watching watching tv 作句子主语。8.works 改成works work在句子中为不可数。9.had 改成、have 句子中 应该是国内国外所发生的事情，不应该用过去完成时，而是现在完成时态，因为是过去到现在看电视时发生的事情，而不是过去到过去发生的事情。10. unable 前加be 应该是 i will be unable to unble 是形容词 前面要加系动词。