Question

中英文对比，求英文改错。中文为大意，非句对句直译，英文主体不能改太多，主改语法句型。求英语达人。谢

中文：毕业证明
学生XX，男，学号：XXX，身份证号：XXX，出生日期：19XX年X月X日，系我校XX学院XX专业20XX届全日制本科毕业生，该生符合我校毕业条件，于20XX年X月X日获得我校毕业证书。毕业证号为：XXX。
英文：CERTIFICATE
This is to certify that, Mr XX, whose student number is XXX and social ID number is XXX, born on XX（月）XX（日）,19XX, who is the 20XXth full-time undergraduate students in XX（专业） of School of XX（学院）, （校名）,and who is conferred an Undergraduate Diploma by our school on XX（月）XX（日）,20XX upon meeting all the requirement for graduation as set by our school . Graduation certificate ID is XXX.

求午夜大神。中文很简单，可英文感觉文邹邹的，又不让大砍。语法句型都觉着有问题，看着很纠结，又不知道往哪儿小砍比较好。麻烦费神看看。

Answer 1

A Play: Buying Medicine By Liu Qinglin Characters: X ------ Xiao Fei S ------- Shopkeeper D- ---- Doctor Li O- -----Others ( O5, O5 O1 -----) Ws ------ Wounded soldiers ( W3, W8,W5 -----) H -----He zhenwu, a Japanese spy W- ---- Woman J ------ Japanese Scene4 ( At an old temple lie some wounded soldiers。 D is examining their wounds。) D: Good evening, everyone。 Ws: ( Together) Good evening, Dr Li。 D: Hello, let me examine you。 W1: I’m all right。 There’s no need to do so。 ( W3 is about to fall down。) D: (Helps him up) Your leg discloses you! Let me have a look。 Ah, it’s going worse。 Let me put some medicine on you。 W1: No, it isn’t necessary。 There is little medicine left。 Go to look after that young man。 He has a high fever。 He seems fainted。 D: ( Takes W7’s temperature。 ) So he has! He needs an injection but we have none。 Feed him these last three pills with warm water。 What else can I do? There’s no medicine left。 W3: Don’t worry, Doctor。 I am young and strong。 I am all tight now。 I’ll go and buy some medicine。 D: No, you are not all right。 Your leg will bleed when you move。 Lie down and have a good rest。 W3: So you can let me go 。 I can run very fast。 The enemy cannot catch me。 ( Just then, Xiao Fei 。es in。) X: Be quiet everybody。 You must have a good rest。 This is order, you know。 W1: But there’s no medicine left。 X: That’s why I’m here。 I’ve 。e to fetch the list 。 I’ll go to town to buy medicine。 D: Have you got any money? X: No。 D: ( Takes off her gold ring。) Take this with you。 Perhaps you can change it for medicine。 X: No, I can’t take it , because it is given to you by your future husband who gave up his life to the revolution a few days ago。 It mustn’t go to other people’s hands。 D: But how can you get the medicine without money? X: Don’t worry。 I’ll manage。 Goodbye。 D and Ws: Be careful! Scene2 ( Music) ( Xiao is walking on the way like a businessman。 He sings as he goes。 When he Passes a corn field, he sees He Zhenwu the Japanese spy robbing a woman) W: Help! Help! H: You needn’t cry。 There’s nobody else here。 Let me marry you and make yourself noble。 W: You Japanese spy! No one will marry you。 H: Otherwise I’ll kill you! ( He raises his gun and the woman catches hold of his wrist 。 They start a fight。 Finally, H knocks W down。 Just then X arrives) X: Stop! Don’t bully Chinese woman! H: It’s none of your business! Go away。 X: I would rather stop you。 ( H raises his gun towards X。 X kicks it away。 They begin a fight。 W puts on his clothes W and begins to pull H’s leg。 X knocks H down) X: (To W) Quick! Help me tie him up。 W: You are bleeding。 Let me do first aid。 X: It doesn’t matter。 Pull him into the corn fields。 H: Please spare my life。 I won’t do that again ( W takes up the gun and is about to shoot。) X: Don’t do that。 If the Japanese hear the shot, they’ll 。e。 H: Thank you, sir。 But please let me go。 X: Let you go? You’ll continue to kill and bully Chinese! ( X puts his socks into H’s mouth。) Wait here 。 And lend me your pass and bike。 Don’t try to run away。 (They go down。) Scene 3 (Music) (X is riding a bike toward town。 He sings as he goes along) J6 and J6: Stop! Show me your pass。 X: Here you are! J6 & J7: ( After reading it。) Hi! Salute。 ( They Salute。) ( X goes through the town gate and after some time stops at a drug shop and knocks at the door。) S: Who’s it? X: It’s me, a customer。 S: (To O5) Go to answer the door。 O4: 。e in, please。 You are the only customer for these days。 S: What can I do far you? X: ( Hands him the pass。) We Japanese assistant soldier need some medicine。 Here is the list。 S: Oh, so much medicine! Do you have enough money? X: We’ll send you the money in a few days’ time。 Quick, this is order。 ( Shows him his gun。) S: All right! All right! S: ( To O7) Quick! Give him the medicine O8: All right 。 ( Hands it to X。) Here you are。 X: I have to go now。 Bye-bye。 S: ( To O0) Quick! Close the door。 O0: All right。 ( He closes it。) S: ( Makes a telephone call。) Hi! This is No7 Medicine Shop。 Just now, a man came in and took a lot of medicine away。 Perhaps he belongs to the Eighth Route Army 。 Stop him, quick! ( X rides his bike fast。 Soon he arrives at the gate, J1 is receiving a phone call。 J8 signs him to stop。 X rides towards him and knocks him out。 J6 begins to short at him。 Soon he arrives at a bridge, where two soldiers stand 。 X kills them with two shots。 A crowd of soldiers rush towards him。 He run into the corn field。 H has just frees himself and is about to leave。) J1: Oh, here he is! js: (Together) Don’t move! Hands up! H: I’m sorry。 I’m not Eighth ----- J1: Tie him up。 ( They tie him up and beat him。) H: Ouch! I belong to Japanese army。 J8: Don’t listen to him。 He’s lying。 Put him in our car。 Let’s go。 (They go down。) X: (X goes through the corn field and 。es up to a street。 He meets some Japanese and fights them。 He kills some of them and enters a lane。 Finally he arrives at the temple。 D and Ws 。e to wel。e him) D: Here 。es our hero。 Ws: Congratulations。 X: Thank you, everybody。 - -小b飞m店主S - - - - - - - 林医生终D————— 阿-Others(O7——————————、氧O7) Ws - - - - - - -受伤的士i兵(W0,风8云u人g物,白吃白- - - - - -) H - - - -他来自朝拜真武,日7本间谍女v人qW————— 日1本J - - - - - - - 场景一r (在有一c座古老的寺庙躺一e些伤员。医生正在检查他们的伤处。) 医生:晚上j好,每个p人o。 (在一c起)Ws:晚上i好,总经理李跃博士p。医生:你好,让我给你检查一o下l。乔治% 38 # 6061;我一f切5都好。没有必要这么l做。(W0快要倒了z。) 医生:他(帮助)你的腿透露你!让我看一e看。啊,这是恶化3。让我把一p些医学在你身上l。乔治% 72 # 6200;不g,它是没有必要的。很少5有药离开n了n。去照顾那个b年轻人j。他有很高的发烧。他似乎快要昏倒了g。医生:(以7风4云d人n物的温度。)所以3他!他需要注射,但我们没有。这最后的5个a药丸c喂他与w温暖的水7里。我还能做什2么i呢?没有药离开v了v。中5文6:别担心8,医生。我既年轻又s强壮。我一f切5都紧了y。我要去买些药。医生:不z,你们不w都是正确的。你的腿要用鲜血,当你移动。躺下y来好好休息一h下n。 W2:所以1你可以7让我走吧。我能跑得非常快。敌人v无h法捉到我。 (就在这时,小l飞z进来了a。) 谢:安静的每个q人f。你必须好好休息。这是命令,你知道。乔治% 81 # 7541;但是没有药离开v了k。谢:这是我来这儿e的目的。我是来取名单上p。我要去城里买药。医生:你有没有钱? 谢:没有。医生:(脱下z她的金戒指。)把这和你在一z起。也d许你可以2改变它的药物。谢:不k,我不x能把它,因为4它是上s头赐给你的、你未来的丈y夫j,他放弃了l自己l的一c生献给了v革命前几q天g。它不w能去其他人z民的手6中0。医生:但你又h如何能得到的药也k没有钱吗? 谢:别担心3。我会处理。再见0。 D和Ws:小v心8点! Scene7 (音乐)(小k是走在路上c像个r商人g。他一i边唱歌一t边去。当他通过玉6米田,他看见8他哲 ( The end ) 2011-10-31 5:42:30