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我叫XX，申请的是釜山大学的居住环境系。
衣食住都是与人们生活息息相关的。尤其是人们的生活环境更是重要。好的生活环境不仅使我们生活得更舒适，而且能让我们生活得更健康。
我想要成为一名室内设计师或者策划者。我通过网站了解了一下我们学校居住环境学的课程，发现他跟建筑学相比，他更重视房屋内部的设计而且把居住环境与人们的健康联系起来，学习的东西也比较广。学习的过程中遇到再多困难，我也要把它学好，大二开始学好各种基础设计并掌握各种软件，大四开始还要多实践，比如多参加一些研讨会。
釜山大学是一座与国际交流很频繁的大学，在这里能够学习到国际上先进的技术和思想，而在中国这个专业是个新兴的专业，所以在釜山大学学习这个专业会学到比较成熟的知识。中国现在从事是内设计的人不多，学习这个专业以后不仅就业机会多，关键这门学科是我的兴趣所在。我想要设计出更漂亮，办公更方便，生活更舒适，健康，更加节省资源的室内设计。釜山的人民很热情而且釜山的气候真的非常好，釜山大学更是美丽，我感到在釜山生活是非常舒服的，在釜山学习是非常愉快的，我喜欢这种感觉，我渴望成为釜山大学的译名学生。

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Answer 1

I called XX, for the Pusan University Department of the living environment.
Food, clothing and housing and are closely related to people's lives. In particular, people's living environment is important. Good living environment is not only to make our lives more comfortable, but also allows us to live more healthy.
I want to become an interior designer or planner. I learned about the site through our schools about the living environment of the course and found him with the architecture, he is more attention to the internal design of housing and living conditions and the health of people linked to learning things more widely. Learning process encountered more difficulties, I should also learn it, the sophomore started all learn basic design and use of various kinds of software, and four more practice started, such as attend more seminars.
Pusan National University and is a frequent international exchanges of university, here to learn the international advanced technology and ideas, but in China the profession is emerging in the professional, Pusan University in the study of the professionals will learn more mature knowledge. China is now engaged in the design, not many people, after learning the profession not only employment opportunities, a key discipline that is my interest lies. I want to design more beautiful, office more convenient and more comfortable life, health, save more resources in interior design. Busan people very warm climate of Busan really very good, Pusan University is beautiful, I am living in Pusan is very uncomfortable, in Busan learning is very happy, I like this feeling, I aspire to be the translation of Pusan University students.

Answer 2

My name is XX, what to apply for is the living environment department of the fu mountain university.
The food and clothing live are living with people vitally related.It is also importance to is the people's living environment particularly.The good living environment not only make us living more comfortable, but also can make us living to get more healthy.
I like to be an interior design teacher or plan.I pass the course that the living environment that the website understood our school learn, discovering him learning with building to compare, he even values the design of the house inner part and living environment and people of healthy contact, the thing of the study also more and widely.It meet in the process of the study again many difficulty, I also want to learn it good, big two start learn various foundation design and control various software, the big quarto starts to still want to practice much, attending some seminars for example and much.
The fu mountain university is a very multifarious university of and international exchangeses, at the here can study international up forerunner of technique and thought, but is a newly arisen profession in this profession in China, so study that this profession would learn the more mature knowledge in the fu mountain university.Chinese now be engaged in is inside not much, the person of design studies this profession hereafter not only the employment opportunities is many, this course of key is my interest place.I want to design more beautiful, transact more convenient, live more comfortable, health, save the interior design of the resources more.The people of the mountain of fu are very hot liver and the weather of the mountain of fu is really very good, the fu mountain university is also a beauty, I feel is very comfortable in the fumountain life, is very pleased in the fu mountain study, I like this kind of felling, I hope earnestly to become the fu mountain university to translate a student.