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我叫XX，申请的是釜山大学的居住环境系。
衣食住都是与人们生活息息相关的。尤其是人们的生活环境更是重要。好的生活环境不仅使我们生活得更舒适，而且能让我们生活得更健康。
我想要成为一名室内设计师或者策划者。我通过网站了解了一下我们学校居住环境学的课程，发现他跟建筑学相比，他更重视房屋内部的设计而且把居住环境与人们的健康联系起来，学习的东西也比较广。学习的过程中遇到再多困难，我也要把它学好，大二开始学好各种基础设计并掌握各种软件，大四开始还要多实践，比如多参加一些研讨会。
釜山大学是一座与国际交流很频繁的大学，在这里能够学习到国际上先进的技术和思想，而在中国这个专业是个新兴的专业，所以在釜山大学学习这个专业会学到比较成熟的知识。中国现在从事是内设计的人不多，学习这个专业以后不仅就业机会多，关键这门学科是我的兴趣所在。我想要设计出更漂亮，办公更方便，生活更舒适，健康，更加节省资源的室内设计。釜山的人民很热情而且釜山的气候真的非常好，釜山大学更是美丽，我感到在釜山生活是非常舒服的，在釜山学习是非常愉快的，我喜欢这种感觉，我渴望成为釜山大学的译名学生。

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Answer 1

(我叫XX属于中文特有建议你用 My name call XX）My name call XX, the living environment that what to apply for is an University of Pusan fasten.
Food and clothing's live is all living with people vitally related.Particularly being people's living environment is particularlyalso an importance.Good living environment not only make us living have to more comfortable, and can make us living more healthy.
I like to be an interior design teacher perhaps plan.I understood through a website the living environment of our school learns all of a sudden of course, discover him to learn to compare with building, he values the design of house inner part more and the living environment and people of healthy contact, study of the thing be also more wide.Study of in the process meet again have another difficulty, I also want to learn it, great two beginningses learn very various foundation design and control various software, the big quarto starts to still want to much practice and for example attend some seminars more.
The University of Pusan is 1 and international exchanges very multifarious university, can study here international up the forerunner's technique and thought, but is a newly arisen profession in this profession in China, so study this profession in the University of Pusan will learn more mature knowledge.Chinese be engaged in now is inside not much, the persons of design study this profession hereafter not only employment opportunities many, key this academics is my interest.I want to design more beautiful, transact more convenient, live more comfortable, health, save the interior design of resources more.The people of Pusan are very passionate and the weather of Pusan be really good, the University of Pusan is also a beauty, my feeling living in Pusan is very comfortable and study in Pusan is very pleased, I like this kind of felling and I hope earnestly to become a student: translate of University of Pusan.

Answer 2

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Answer 3

My name is XX, apply for the Pusan University Department of the living environment.
Food, clothing and housing and are closely related to people's lives. In particular, people's living environment is important. Good living environment is not only to make our lives more comfortable, but also allows us to live more healthy.
I want to become an interior designer or planner. I learned about the site through our schools about the living environment of the course and found him with the architecture, he is more attention to the internal design of housing and living conditions and the health of people linked to learning things more widely. Learning process encountered more difficulties, I should also learn it, the sophomore started all learn basic design and use of various kinds of software, and four more practice started, such as attend more seminars.
Pusan National University and is a frequent international exchanges of university, here to learn the international advanced technology and ideas, but in China the profession is emerging in the professional, Pusan University in the study of the professionals will learn more mature knowledge. China is now engaged in the design, not many people, after learning the profession not only employment opportunities, a key discipline that is my interest lies. I want to design more beautiful, office more convenient and more comfortable life, health, save more resources in interior design. Busan people very warm climate of Busan really very good, Pusan University is beautiful, I am living in Pusan is very uncomfortable, in Busan learning is very happy, I like this feeling, I aspire to be a Pusan University students.

Answer 4

I call XX, application of is the living environment of University of Pusan to fasten.
Food and clothing's live all is with people life vitally related.Particularly being people's living environment is particularlyalso an importance.Good living environment not only make us living more comfort, and the ability let we life more health.
I like to be an interior design teacher perhaps plan.I passed a website understanding once the living environment of our school learn of course, detection him learning to compare with building, he more value house inner part of design and the living environment and people of health the contact get up, study of thing also more wide.Study of in the process meet again many difficulty, I also want to learn it, big two start learn very various foundation design and control various software, the big quarto start to still want much practice, for example and much attend some seminar.
The University of Pusan is 1 and international exchanges very multifarious university, here can study go to international top the forerunner's technique and thought, but at China this profession is that one be newly arisen of profession, so at University of Pusan study this profession will learn more mature of knowledge.China now be engaged in is inside design of the person be few, study this profession later not only employment opportunities many, key this academics be my interest.I want a design more beautiful, transact more convenience, life more comfort, health, more economical the interior design of resources.The people of Pusan very enthusiasm and the weather of Pusan be really good, the University of Pusan be also a beauty, I feel in Pusan life is very comfortable, in Pusan study is very delectation, I like this kind of felling, I desire become a student: translate of University of Pusan.

Answer 5

I call XX, the living environment that what to apply for is an University of Pusan fastens.
Food and clothing's living is all with people living vitally related.Ising people's living environment particularly is particularlyalso an importance.Good living environment not only make us living have to more comfortable, and can make us living more healthily.
I like to be an interior design teacher perhaps plan.I pass the course that the website understood once the living environment of our school to learn, discover him to learn to compare with building, he values the design of house inner part more and the living environment and people of healthy contact, study of the thing is also more wide.Study of in the process meet again have another difficulty, I also want to learned it, great two beginningses learn very various foundation design and control various software, the big quarto starts to still want to practice much, attending some seminars more for example.
The University of Pusan is 1 and international exchanges very multifarious university, can study here international up the forerunner's technique and thought, but in China this profession is a newly arisen profession, so study this profession in the University of Pusan will learn more mature knowledge.Chinese be engaged in now is inside design of not much, the person studies this profession hereafter not only employment opportunities many, key this academics is my interest place.I want to design to be more beautiful, transacting more convenient, live more comfortable, save the interior design of resources healthily and more.The people of Pusan are very hot liver and the weather of Pusan is really good, the University of Pusan is also a beauty, my feeling living in Pusan is very comfortable, studying in Pusan is very pleased, I like this kind of felling, I hope earnestly to become University of Pusan to translate a student.

Answer 6

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My name is **.What I'am applying for is the living environment department of the pusan university.
Eating, clothing,and housing has a close relationship with our lives,especially with our living environment.Good environment can make our lives not only more comfortable ,but also healthier.
I want to be an interior designer or planner. I have learned about the courses of the living environment department through the internet and found it emphasize the internal design of housing and living conditions to connect them with the health of people compared to the architecture .What's more, things which are taught here are more widely.No matter how many difficulties I'll encounter in the course of studying here , I'll do it with my best. When I become a sophomore ,I'll learn all kinds of basic designs and grasp various kinds of software. And when the fourth year starts,I'll take part in more practice and attend more seminars.
The University of Pusan is such a university which has frequent communication international wide .I can learn the most advanced technique and thought here.While in China it is only newly arisen So I think the University of Pusan will offer me more knowledge that is maturer.Now ,there're only a few people in China who work as inside designers, so studying these courses in the department can brings me a brighter future.What's the most important is , that's where my interest lies. I want to create more designs which are more beautiful, more convenient, more comfortable, and healthier , more economical .The people of Pusan are very kind and the weather here is really good.And the University of Pusan is also beautiful. I feel comfortable and happy living here ,in Pusan.And I really like it.I just want to be one of the students of Pusan University.