跪求英语改错答案,很急!

第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉... 第一节 短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
  假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
  1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
  2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mr. Johnson,
  I've learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I am eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua. I was born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health. I've just graduated in the Computer Department of Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am special good at computer studies and English. I can read science books in English and doing some writing in English as well. Beside, I know a little French. And in my spare time ,I enjoy playing basketball. As is said that your company is very famous and I'll very glad if you let me work for it. My telephonenumber is 027-89276628 .I amlooking forward to hearing from you soon.
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are wanting are wanted
am eager to being am eager to be
graduated in graduated from
did very good in did very well in
special specially
doing some writing do some writing
As is said that It is said that
I'll very glad I'll be very glad
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