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求英语高手

短文改错 ，求高手 Maria was a silly and lazy girl. Often she used to wandering here and there with no purpose . Once, as she went wandeing she felt very thirst. She went to a pond nearby and duank lots of water.Very tiring , she slept right there on the bank of the pond . When she was woke up it was night already .She looked into the pond careflly , so could not see her reflecion.She was puzzled , "Am I really here or not? Well ! Let me to ask my mother." she went home and found door closed. She callse out ,"Is Maria in?" A sleepy voice replied ,"Oh ! He must be in bed !"Maria thought , "Unless Maria's at home , I'm not Maria." Saying this , she went away

Answer 1

Maria was a silly and lazy girl. Often she used to wander here and there with no purpose . Once, as she went wandering she felt very thirsty. She went to a pond nearby and drunk lots of water. Very tired, she slept right there on the bank of the pond . When she woke up it was night already . She looked into the pond carefully but could not see her reflecion. She was puzzled , "Am I really here or not? Well ! Let me ask my mother." she went home and found the door closed. She called out ,"Is Maria in?" A sleepy voice replied ,"Oh! He must be in bed !" Maria thought , "Since Maria's at home , I'm not Maria." Having said this , she went away.

Answer 2

Maria was a silly and lazy girl. Often she used to wandering here and there with no purpose . Once, as she went wandeing she felt very thirsty. She went to a pond nearby and duank lots of water.Very tired , she slept right there on the bank of the pond . When she woke up it was night already .She looked into the pond carefully , so could not see her reflecion.She was puzzled , "Am I really here or not? Well ! Let me ask my mother." she went home and found door closed. She called out ,"Is Maria in?" A sleepy voice replied ,"Oh ! He must be in bed !"Maria thought , "Unless Maria's at home , I'm not Maria." Saying this , she went away.
错误的都改了

Answer 3

这还用高手么？我就能搞定了。不过有点长啊！
玛利亚是个又笨又懒的女孩。她经常毫无目的地这里那里瞎逛。一次，她正闲逛的时候，突然口渴难耐。她就跑到一个附近的池塘喝了很多的水。由于很累，她就睡在那池塘的岸边了。当她醒来的时候，天已经黑了。她仔细往池塘里一看，她看不到自己的倒影了。她很疑惑，“我是真的在这里还是没在啊？好吧，我去问问妈妈。”她回到家发现门锁了。她叫道：“玛利亚在吗？”一个昏昏欲睡的声音回答到，“噢，他（这里是不是错了，应该是she她）应该上床睡了。”玛利亚想，“玛利亚在家那我就不是玛利亚”，说完这些，她就走开了。

Answer 4

used有often的意思，故often删去；
used to do sth.故wandering→wander;
thirst v&n→thirsty
duank→drunk
tiring→tired
was woke→woke
careflly→carefully
so→but
reflecion→reflection
let me to→let me
callse→called
He→She