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[急]帮忙检查一下英语作文[在线等]

假定你是广播员，国防大学(National Defense University)张教授要你来校举办有关美国军事的讲座。请你写一个广播通知，要说明讲座是帮助同学们学习军事的好机会，要求同学们参加并做好笔记。时间6月15日上午8点到10，地点会议室。
Attention,please!National Defense University Professor Zhang want you to come to the United States held military talks.The talks was to help students learn about military a good opportunity to participate and make a wonderful Notes.8:00 a.m. to 10:00 a.m. on June 15 in Conference Room.Thank you for listening.

看看有没有错的地方，帮忙改正一下~

Answer 1

Attention,please!National Defense University Professor Zhang wants you to come to the United States held military talks.The talk can help students to learn about military a good opportunity to participate and make a wonderful Notes.8:00 a.m. to 10:00 a.m. on June 15 in Conference Room.Thank you for listening!

Answer 2

你这是用软件直接翻译的吧，晕，这什么根什么啊 ，逻辑关系都不对