Question

英语翻译。

帮忙看看我的翻译是否有错误或者不准确地地方。同时看看能不能修改使其更加地道或者简练。谢谢。

1.那位名演员似乎很乐意在剧中扮演一个次要角色。
That famous actor seemed quite content to play a minor role in the drama.
2.国庆节要到了，咱们把寝室彻底（thorough)打扫一下吧。
The National Day is approaching,let's have our dorm thorough cleaned.
3.她非常勉强地同意让一位年轻医生为她做手术。
She quite reluctantly agreed to let a young doctor operate on her.
4.他们已经安排好让我们明天去游览长城，我相信我们再那儿一定会玩的很开心。
They've arranged for us to visit The Great Wall,I believe we will have a nice time there.
5.老人读完信后失望之极，竟用颤抖的手指把它撕得粉碎。
The old felt disappointed after reading the letter,even tore it into pieces with his trembled fingers.
6.老两口为他们的孙子感到骄傲，因为他在第28届奥运会上获得了两枚金牌和一枚铜牌。
The old couple are proud of their grandson,as he won two gold medals and a bronze medals in The 28th Olympic Games.
7.即使他得祖母不能来参加他得生日宴会，她也会寄给他一件可爱的礼物。对这一点TOM深信不疑。
Though his grandmother can't come to his birthday party,she will sent him a lovely present.Tom believes it firmly.
8.昨天是MARRY的二十岁生日。她父亲寄给她一双靴子，她母亲为她买了一盒巧克力。而她的男朋友则带给她一束红玫瑰。
Yesterday was Marry's 20 birthday.Her father sent her a pair of shoes,her mother bought her a box of chocolates.As his boyfriend,a bunch of red rose.

Answer 1

哦，我试试看，改得不好表抽我。

1.那位名演员似乎很乐意在剧中扮演一个次要角色。
That famous actor seemed quite happy to act a minor role in the play.
2.国庆节要到了，咱们把寝室彻底（thorough)打扫一下吧。
Since the National Day is coming, let's give our dorm a thorough clean.
3.她非常勉强地同意让一位年轻医生为她做手术。
She agreed to let a young doctor operate on her with obvious reluctance.
4.他们已经安排好让我们明天去游览长城，我相信我们再那儿一定会玩的很开心。
They've arranged for us to visit The Great Wall, where I believe we will have a nice time.
5.老人读完信后失望之极，竟用颤抖的手指把它撕得粉碎。
Disappointed at the letter, the old even tore it into pieces with his trembling fingers.
6.老两口为他们的孙子感到骄傲，因为他在第28届奥运会上获得了两枚金牌和一枚铜牌。
The old couple are proud of their grandson,as he won two gold medals and a bronze medal in the 28th Olympic Games.
7.即使他得祖母不能来参加他得生日宴会，她也会寄给他一件可爱的礼物。对这一点TOM深信不疑。
Tom firmly believes that his grandmother will sent him a lovely present even if she can't attend his birthday party.
8.昨天是MARRY的二十岁生日。她父亲寄给她一双靴子，她母亲为她买了一盒巧克力。而她的男朋友则带给她一束红玫瑰。
Yesterday was Marry's 20th birthday. Her father sent her a pair of shoes. Her mother bought her a box of chocolates. And his boyfriend brought her a bunch of red roses.

Answer 2

2、（Since） National Day is approaching,let's have our dorm（give our dorm a thorough cleaning/cleaned thoroughly）.
3、She quite reluctantly agreed to （let /have） a young doctor operate on her.
4、They've arranged for us to visit The Great Wall, （where） I believe we will have a nice time .
5、The old （man）felt （so） disappointed after reading the letter （as to tear） it into pieces with his（ trembling） fingers.
6、The old couple are proud of their grandson,as he（has） won two gold medals and a bronze medals in The 28th Olympic Games.
7、（Even though） his grandmother can't come to his birthday party,she will （sent） him a lovely present，(which ) Tom（ is sure about）.
8、Yesterday was Marry's （20th） birthday.Her father sent her a pair of shoes and her mother bought her a box of chocolates.As for his boyfriend,（ he sent her） a bunch of red （roses）.
仅供参考！
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Answer 3

1.乐意 be willing to
be content with 一般指满足
2.要到了可以用be around the corner 更地道
thorough是adj. 修饰动词clean 要用adv. thoroughly
3.可以分开，Letting a young doctor operate on her,she agreed quite reluctantly.
5. Having read the letter,the old man was extreme disappionted. Unexpectedly,he tore it to shreds.
6.a bronze medal 用单数
7.可以用 be deeply convinced
用虚拟语气 ，表示假设
8.至于as for
20th birthday of Marry

Answer 4

第2句，thorough改为thoroughly

第5句，你大概是看到中文部分有“竟”字，用了个even，似乎有点不合乎英语语境，改成 and then 好些吧；后面的不能用trembled，要改成trembling。

第6句，我感觉中间也是个语言习惯问题，as用在引导从句中，通常情况下才会分开，所以as如果作“因为”的意思讲，前面的逗号去掉比较好，形成一个整句。或者，as he 改成 who，后面就是定店从句，不必强制把“因为”翻译出来，意思其实也没变。外加两个小小小小问题：a bronze medal（单数）；The要用 the（首字母小写，专有名词前的定冠词the不用大写，第4句也是一样）

第8句，20应为20th，后半句as感觉用的有些别扭，as如果当作“作为”来讲，as sb.后面要引导出一个整句的： As her（不是his）boyfriend,he bought her a bunch of red rose.但这句之前没有对他男朋友的描述，也不太合适。
As 改成 As for 吧，或者改成整句，And her boyfried bought her a bunch of red rose.

就给这些建议，仅仅是建议，反正就是些小小问题，您再看一下吧~ 希望能对你有所帮助~

Answer 5

2.国庆节要到了，咱们把寝室彻底（thorough)打扫一下吧。
The National Day is approaching,let's have our dorm thorough cleaned.（thorough是形容词，建议改成 cleaned thoroughly)
其他好像都挺好的。

Answer 6

1、The actor seemed content to take a minor part in the play
2、National Day is round the corner. Let's give our bedroom/dorm a thorough clean it(国庆节不加前面不能加the)
3、. She is very reluctant to agree that a young doctor to operate on her
4、They've arranged for us to visit the Great Wall tomorrow, I believe that we will be there having a good time
5、After reading the letter the old man was so disappointed that he with trembling fingers tore it into pieces
6、The old couple were proud of their grandson, because he is in the 28 th Olympic Games won two gold MEDALS and one bronze medal.
7、Even if his grandmother could not come to his birthday party, she would send him a lovely present. TOM convinced of that.
8、Yesterday was MARRY twentieth birthday. Her father sent her a pair of boots, her mother as she bought a box of chocolate. And her boyfriend is to bring her a bunch of red roses.
希望对你有帮助

追问

第二个句子最后为什么有个IT，感觉语法说不通啊，
第五个为什么是trembling.

追答

it 是指寝室
和reading一致