Question

谁能帮我写篇高中英语作文啊

假如你是李华,收到笔友Tom的来信.Tom在信中提到他最近在劝好友Andy戒烟,但Andy却因此与他绝交,这件事令他很烦恼.请你给Tom写一封回信,提出一些建议.词数:120~150;可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯

Answer 1

Dear Tom，
I‘m sorry to hear that you are upset about your relationship with Andy. I think what you have done is right,but if you pay attention to the way of your suggestion, maybe he can be easily accept it.
You'd better tell him more about the danger of smoking.You can tell him that every year hundreds of thousands of people around the world die from diseases caused by smoking.One in two lifetime smokers will die from their habit. Half of these deaths will occur in middle age.Smoking causes around one in five deaths from heart disease.In younger people, three out of four deaths from heart disease are due to smoking. At last you should tell him to quip smoking for the sake of his health.
I think telling him more about the facts is more effective than anything else. I hope you can get along well with your friend.
Yours
lihua

Answer 2

Dear Tom hello,

I recently heard that you worry, to be you friend, I worried about him, because the effect of smoking on the body is not very good, so we have to help him, but for his many methods, we can let you have a look that smoking is harmful to health books, his probation, slowly. He, he would understand. So you do not worry, do not put all not happy things in my heart does not say, so can not solve the problem. Remember you still have me. Your best friend Li hua.

Answer 3

拜托，我才上小学，你让我写这个干嘛？？？