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请帮我修改一下这个翻译：万分感谢！！

我们的图书馆
我们的图书馆在学校明德楼一层的中间位置。你如果想去的话，请跟我走：进明德楼大门，直走约10米右拐。我们的图书馆是一个小图书馆，因为学校没有钱建立一个像重点大学的大图书馆一样大的图书馆。虽然我们的图书馆比较小，但是里面书的种类还是十分多的，像是经济学、英语、社会学等等……而且我认为一个人的成才与这个人所在的地方是怎么样的并没有必然联系。我常常去图书馆看书，我最爱的书是《谁偷了我的奶酪》，那是一本很有趣的书，如果大家有兴趣的话可以去图书馆看。图书馆是个安静的地方，我喜欢在那里看书，那儿让我感觉身心放松，你呢？
Our school library in the Ming Tak Building a layer of intermediate position. If you want to go, please go with me: into the Ming Tak building door, go on for about 10 meters and turn right. Our library is a small library, because the school does not have the money to build a like key university library as the library. Although our library is relatively small, but there are many kinds of books, such as economics, sociology, english ... ... And I think that a person's talent and this place is like and do not have inevitable connection. I often go to the library to read a book, I most love the book is" who moved my cheese", that is a very interesting book, if you are interested can go to the library to read. The library is a quiet place, where I like to read a book, it makes me feel relaxed, you?

Answer 1

Our school library lies in the middle of the first floor in Mingde Building . If you want to go, please follow me. Entering the building gate, go straign for about 10 meters and turn right. Our library is a small library, because the school does not have the money to build a big library like the ones inkey universities. Although our library is relatively small, but there are many kinds of books, such as economics, sociology, English ... ... And I think that a person's talent has nothing to do with the place he stays. I often go to the library to read a book. The book I like most is" Who Stole My Cheese", that is a very interesting book. If you are interested you can read it in the library . The library is a quiet place, where I like to read a book, it makes me feel relaxed, and you?

Answer 2

Our school library is in the middle of first floor of Ming Tak Building. If you want to go, please follow me: enter the Ming Tak building, go straight for about 10 meters, then turn right. It is a small library, because our school has no much money to build a big one like key universities' . Although our library is small, there are many kinds of books, such as economics, sociology, english ... ... And I think that a person's seccess has no connecting with where he is. I often go to the library to read books. My favourate one is" who moved my cheese", which is very interesting. If you are interested in it, you can go to the library for it. The library is a quiet place, where I like to read books and let me feel relaxed. What about you?