Question

我自己写得英语作文，水平很差，请大家指出语法错误！

请说的全面一点，最好是整篇作文的错误点。要是能提出建议以便我提高就更好了~~~谢谢噢~~~~
New criteria for a Good Student

It is commonly believed that judge a student good or bad is depend on study greads.However,a lot of changes have taken place in the judge students.A good greads not the only criteria for a good student any more.
There may be several possible reasons for the phenomenon.Above more,society become focus on students' Comprehensive development.What's more,a student who have good greads doesn't means he is really good one.
From my point of view,This change is a good news for students and their partents,students have not to just care about their greads,they can do what they really want to do!

Answer 1

good bad这种词用的太多了吧，比如第一句就可以用student's quality，is是不对的要去掉，study greads？你是想说学习成绩吧，grade，that后面那个judge本身是动词，后面depend也是，你要么变成to judge，或是judging。in the judge students也是把the去掉，改成judging。然后最后一句可以接到前一句，不然太短了，可以是...that the school record is no longer the absolute criteria for judging student's quality.
第2段第一句可以写成There're several possible explanations for the phenomenon.因为如果用reasons for the phenomenon，总是有点不对劲的感觉，我是看了两遍这句话才知道你想表达的意思。后面above more(这种没见过，不存在吧？)....what's more....一堆more，第一次可以用比如first of all,后面那个可以用further more，what's more太随意了。另外那个become focus on这个就不对，同时出现两个谓语动词，好歹也加个to或变个动名词形式吧。可以改成the student's comprehensive quality has became the focus of our society's attention.后面也是，可以改成the school record of students has gradully faded into insignificance when to judge a student's quality.
最后一段this change，你看你第一段说a lot of changes，说实话我也没明白你都说了哪些change，好像你只说了一个，那么第一段可以改成单数，但是只用个change总感觉不太合适，既然是评判标准就应该把这个‘标准’加上，比如a great change of the criteria for judging.....

Answer 2

it is commonly believed that grade is the key factor to judge rather a student is good or bad. However, a lot of changes have take place for judging a student. Getting good grade is not the only criteria for a good student anymore.
There may be several possible reasons for the phenomenon. One of the key reason is because the society becomes more focus on student's comprehensive developement. Furthermore, Having good grade doesn't mean he or she is a good student.
From my point of view, this change is a good news for students and their parents;Students may now focus on what they desire to do, rather than focusing on their grade.

Answer 3

第一行is depend on错误，应改为depends on;成绩grades拼写错误；第二行应该为in judging students;倒数第二行第一句错误，应该为in my opinion.

Answer 4

gread是什么