Question

英语作文：今天是星期天，你和同学参观北京动物园，请用英语写一篇日记，继续今天的经历。

必须用到fine sun beijing zoo animals so interesting some foreign visitors throw 这些词。
不少于70词
看好！七十分了，加了五十分！给我来个长一点的行吗？

Answer 1

Today is a nice sunday , I feel very happy , because i 'll with my friend to visit the zoo .
when we use halfhour to find one's way to the zoo . Because it's Sunday, so a lot of tourist in the zoo . we walk a round the zoo ,we not find any animal is attracted we very much. suddenly find A monkey swings on the tree , just for a moment a lot of people come to see this lovable little monkey , we want take pictures with this little monkey , we find a foreign friend take pictures for us.
We have transferred a meeting in the zoo , we leave the zoo at 12 O ' clock . Today is my favorite day

还有一个：
Early Sunday morning I go to the zoo, I'll go with him the helpless, the zoo is not far from my home, we just can arrive half an hour to walk, the weather is good, tourists also pretty much, we love the monkey monkey, but also very interested in us, where there are many foreigners, I still made many foreign friends, they are very enthusiastic, we play until noon home from the morning but into the noon time really happy

如果高级别一点，这个是用过去时写的：
We spent about half hour in walking. However, good weather made us really happy and comfortable. As we expected, there has been a lot of people when we arrived there. Monkeys looked interesting. They run and jumped everywhere they can. Lukily, we met couples of foreigners. I did not waste chance to talk with them for a while.

追问

你能写一个自己的吗？而且要用到我说的那些词！

追答

Today is a fine sunday,with the sunshine in the sky.I went to the Beijing Zoo with my parents.The animals were interesting!For example:monkeys,rabbits,tigers,fish and etc.I saw some people throw bananas for monkey.Monkeys jumped here and there.some birds' song was very beautiful.In the afternoon,I saw some foreign visitors were looking at the tigers.they were very happy to see those tigers.We found a foreign friend took pictures for us.We left the zoo at 6 p.m.I was very happy to see the interesting animals.

这个可是我自己写的

Answer 2

A Visit to the zoo

Today is Sunday. The sun is shining , and the shy is blue .I go to WangCheng park with my parents ,and visit the zoo.
There are so many animals in the zoo ,tighters liones,Wolves ,deers ,bears,birds and so on .I like them very much .In the northwest corner of the park, there are two elephants . They have big noses ,long teeth, big ears , and their bodies are liking big walls .They are eating carrots ,and very kind to us . Near the elephants,the is a monkey-hill. Many monkeys are living in the hill. Some are eating, some are playing games ,some are climbing hill, some are having a rest . Look ,there are three monkeys ,two large and one small, they are sitting one by one ,and combing hairs for each other. What a happy family!
Time go by fast .It is time to have lunch . We have to leave . I will never forget this interesting day.

参观动物园
今天是星期天，阳光明媚，天空湛蓝，我和爸爸妈妈一块儿去王城公园，参观动物园。
动物园里有许多动物，有老虎、狮子、狼、鹿、熊和鸟类等等。我很喜欢这些动物。在公园的西北角有两只大象，他们有长鼻子、长牙齿、大耳朵，像墙一样的身体，它们正在吃红萝卜，他们对我们很友善。距离大象不远处，有一座猴山，那里住着很多猴子。有的在吃东西，有的在玩游戏，有的在爬山，有的在休息。快看！那里有三只猴子，两大、一小，他们一个挨一个坐着，在互相梳理着毛发，真是一个幸福的家庭！
时间过得真快！午饭的时间到了，我们不得不离开了。这真是有意义的一天，我将永久难忘。

（因为还没有学习过去式，我用一般现在时写作文。中间有很多动物用的是复数名词形式。我重点描写了可爱的大象和猴子，因为我觉得他们更可爱。）

Answer 3

Today is sunday,today is fine and sunny,I want to visit the beijing zoo with my classmates , so I am happy ,I like monkey it eats bananas are interesting , I think animals foreingn with me , some visitors ,too , I see some people throw banana s for monkey , many monkeys are both happy ,in the zoo i see tiger it is big ，And zebra it is beautiful its body is black and white , I take many pictures …………we go home at five o'clock today i am tired and hapyy

Answer 4

welcome to beijing zoo. let me introduce myself. i'm wang ping. you can call me xiao wang. today i'll show you around our zoo. our zoo is the biggest in china, and it has the largest number of animals. here is the plan for today. we'll go to the panda house first. you can see the world famous animal.they look very lovely and honest. then we,il watch the beautiful birds. the monkey hill is near to the bird world. the clever monkeys will welcome you warmly. finally, we'll go to the lion park. don't be close to such animal.

　　please remember, don't feed the animals. ok! have a good holiday! thank you.

Answer 5

Sunday Fine
Today is a nice day and the sun is shining brightly. All the classmates went to visit Beijing Zoo together.
There were so many interesting animals in the zoo, such as tigers, lions, elephants, pandas and monkeys, etc. We like those animals very much and took many photos. Luckily, we met some foreign visitors. They even threw food at monkeys.
Both my classmates and I had a great time in the zoo.