Question

帮忙修改下面的{英文}部分的翻译谢谢.

没有计划的目标只是一个愿望。你是否愿意每天挤出一个小时学习英语呢？如果你愿意，那我可以说你拥有比其他人多10倍的成功可能性。这个方式也适合中小学生，学生在课外的英语学习到最后能够帮助到课内英语学习并能提高成绩，因为语言是相通的。你必须找出一天中哪一个小时是最不受打扰而且最有生产力，可能是睡前，也可能是起床后。

Any goal without a plan is only a wish. so are you willing to squeeze out one hour per day for English learning? If the answer is Yes, then i'm sure that you are 10 times more likely to succeed in English learning. it's also applicable to school English study. The extra English that you learn outside your school can help what you learn inside your school, and can eventually make a great contribution to your exams. Therefore, you have to figure out which one hour in your day is the most distraction-free and the most productive. It could be the one hour before you sleep or the one hour after you rise.

Answer 1

Any goal without a plan is only a 【dream】. so are you willing to 【spend】 one hour in learning English everyday? If the answer is Yes, then i'm sure that you are 10 times more likely to succeed in English learning 【than the others】. it's also applicable to the English study 【at school】. 【What】 you learn outside【 the class】【in your spare time 】 can help【you a lot to digest】 what you 【have learned】 in【 your class】, and can eventually make a great contribution to your exams. Therefore, you have to figure out 【what time】in 【a】 day is the most distraction-free and the most productive.【 For example】 It could be the hour before you sleep or the hour after you rise.

感觉你有逐字翻译的嫌疑，句子不一定要这样，只要最合理就好。我写的话会和你的完全不一样。那我按我的感觉稍微改一下，看看合意不？你可以挑选着修改一下……

希望对您有帮助……

Answer 2

楼主写的很好，放心用吧。我帮你逐字逐句看过了。
像有些楼层纯属无稽之谈。squeeze out 这么好的短语竟然改成spend，无语。。。
总之，没问题的，单词句法都很标准地道。

希望能帮到你！

Answer 3

（前半部分很流畅) …… The English you learned in spare time can help you improve what you've learned in lectures, and eventually make a great contribution to your exams. Thus, you had better reserve one hour for your english study of which is the distraction-free and the productive period of the day. It could be the one hour before you sleep or the one hour after you rise.

Answer 4

还行，但是有点别扭。