Question

请帮忙用英语翻译一下这篇作文。初中英语！谢谢了！！！

我认为要想成功先要确定目标。然后勤奋的学习来不断地完善自己，让自己离成功更近。懒惰的人是不会取得成功的。
还要有坚持不懈的恒心。向着目标不断地奋斗。罗马不是一日建成的。所以只有坚持不懈的努力，才达成自己的目标。
只有勤奋，努力和坚持不懈才能取得最大成功，达成自己的目标。

Answer 1

In my opinion, a goal should be set in order to succeed. Then work hard to improve oneself continuously so as to come close to the success. The lazy one will not be successful.
Perseverance is also needed. Strive after the goal persistently. Rome wasn't built in a day. Only if one works hard continuously, one can meet his goal.
Only diligence, effort and perseverance can lead to great success and meet one's goal.
完全按你写的翻译的，但感觉有些句子重复了。可以自己修改下。

追问

谢谢啊 ！请问是自己翻译的吗 ？如果可以的话您能帮我修改一下吗？英语我自己对自己都无语了

追答

是我自己翻译的，如果修改的话，大概会少好几句话的，有字数限制吗？

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嗯 两百字左右就行了 分两段：一段奋斗；一段：坚持不懈，最后总结。谢谢了！在此叩谢！！！

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In order to succeed, the first step is to set a goal, an easy one to achieve. Then work as hard as you can to improve yourself to meet this goal. Then set another goal which is harder and try to achieve it, and the like. In this way, you can get closer and closer to the success. The early bird catches the worm. Lazy ones will never be successful.
Perseverance is also important. Once you set your goal, strive after it persistently. Rome wasn’t built in a day. Only if you stick to your goal, it’s possible to get it.
The bright future is waiting for you ahead. Only diligence, effort and perseverance can lead to great success. 看这样行不？

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说实话 我的英语真的很差的，看不懂 你觉得可以就行了，我相信你！谢谢啊 ！我只会这一句 Thank you！！！（还不知道对不对）明天要进行万恶的英语考试了，一会还得交代一下后事！总之大哥（大姐）谢谢你啊！

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呵呵，Thank you是对的。其实英语没那么可怕的，重要是打好基础，要不以后会更难的。祝你考试顺利~ 别忘了采纳我的答案哦~

Answer 2

In my opinion, if you want to be successful .First of all, you should set up your goal,and then ,you should improve yourself by studying hard .so that you can get more closer to success. As a matter of fact that the lazy one won't be succeed in doing anything.
What's more,you should be absord in what you are doing and go on working to your aim.
That's a saying that ，"Rome was built in a day".Thus only keeping on working hard ,can you get your goal.only being diligent, working hard ,persevering can you be the most successful，
with the end of gain your aim.
我自己翻译的，希望对你有所帮助

Answer 3

I think the first target to be successful. And hard to learn to constantly improve themselves so that they are away from the more recent success. Lazy people are not successful.
Also have persistent perseverance. Continue to struggle toward the goal. Rome was not built in a day. Therefore, only the persistent effort to achieve their goals.
Only hard work, effort and perseverance in order to achieve the greatest success, achieve their goals.

Answer 4

I think that to be successful first to determine a goal. Then diligent study to continuously improve yourself, let oneself from more recent success. The lazy man will not be successful.
Have the unremitting persistence. Toward target struggles unceasingly. Rome is not built in a day. So only the unremitting efforts, to achieve their goals.
Only hard work, effort and persistence to maximize success, and achieve their goals.

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请问是自己写的还是在线翻译的啊？

追答

我没那个能力帮你一一翻译，在线找找吧，我喜欢这些语句，

追问

哦 谢谢啊 就是在线翻译的句子很生硬，还有很多不通顺。