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My Birthday Party
Today is my birthday. I am very happy. I have a birthday party in the evening in my home. My mothday buy some fruit and a big cake for me. My friends are come to my home. They give me some presents. We eat cake and vegetable salad. It is so great! Then,we drink some lemon tea.We play cards games.
I am very happy today! I enjoy my wonderful party very much! 展开
Today is my birthday. I am very happy. I have a birthday party in the evening in my home. My mothday buy some fruit and a big cake for me. My friends are come to my home. They give me some presents. We eat cake and vegetable salad. It is so great! Then,we drink some lemon tea.We play cards games.
I am very happy today! I enjoy my wonderful party very much! 展开
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My Birthday Party
Today is my birthday. I am very happy. I have a birthday party in the evening in my houes. My mother buys some fruits and a big cake for me. My friends are coming to my home. They give me some presents. We eat cake and vegetable salad. It is so great! Then we drink some lemon tea and play cards games.
I am very happy today! I enjoy my wonderful party very much!
Today is my birthday. I am very happy. I have a birthday party in the evening in my houes. My mother buys some fruits and a big cake for me. My friends are coming to my home. They give me some presents. We eat cake and vegetable salad. It is so great! Then we drink some lemon tea and play cards games.
I am very happy today! I enjoy my wonderful party very much!
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