这篇英语短文,改错,简单的!!!!!

1这是一篇英语课前演讲介绍元宵节的文章。大意就是大家好,今天是我做演讲,希望大家可以认真倾听。元宵节是春节过后的一个重要节日,在这个节日里,人们吃元宵。一家人在房子里做元... 1 这是一篇英语课前演讲介绍元宵节的文章。大意就是 大家好,今天是我做演讲,希望大家可以认真倾听。 元宵节是春节过后的一个重要节日,在这个节日里,人们吃元宵。一家人在房子里做元宵,元宵象征着团圆。人们上街看花灯,大街上有很多花灯,花灯很漂亮。人们很开心,因为他们可以聚在一起。
2 hello everyone ,today is my speech .I hope everyone can listern. The lantern Festern is an important festval after the spring Festival . In the festival. people to eat Sweet dumpling . One family in the house together make Sweet dumpling. Sweet dumpling. represent family reunions. people will go to the Street to see lanterns. Street has many lanterns. lantern is very beautiful. people are happy.Because they can get together.
3 这篇文章里很多时态啊,词汇啊,好像有点差错。帮忙修改一下。希望是手动修改,改好的有追分滴,只限今天晚上之前。。。 谢谢!!
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good morning/afternnon /evening , ladies and gentlemen , it's my honorn to stand hear and give my speech . I will appreciate it if all of you pay attention to my speech .
The lantern Festern is an important festval after the spring Festival .People will eat yuanxiao, on this day, so it is also called the "Yuanxiao Festival."Yuanxiao also has another name, tangyuan.tangyuan in Chinese has a similar pronunciation with "tuanyuan”, meaning reunion. So people eat them to denote union, harmony and happiness for the family.
after eating the delicious Tangyuan, people go outside to see the beautiful lantern. All of us are happy because we are together with our family members and friends.
我觉得这样写可能更好,希望对你有帮助
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Hello,everyone. Today is my speech.I hope everyone can listen carefully.After the Spring Festival,the Lantern Festival is an important day. In the festival, people eat sweet dumplings. The family get together to make sweet dumplings in the house, and sweet dumplings represent
family reunion. There are many lanterns in the street, people will go to the street to see them, they so beautiful. People are very happy because they can get together.
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Hello, everyone! It's my turn to make a speech today. My topic is "the Lantern Festival". The Lantern Festival is an important festival falling on the 15th day of January according to Chinese lunar calendar(阴历). In the countryside, it is celebrated as the last day of the long Spring Festival holiday. People use colourful lanterns to decorate the streets, get together to guess lantern riddles ,eat sweet dumplings, enjoy delicious food and even light firecrackers. It's a wonderful and delighted time of family reunion. Therefore, it's one of my favourite festivals.
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hello ,everyone ,today it is my turn to have a speech .I hope everyone can listern to me carefully . The lantern Festern is an important festval after the spring Festival . In this festival. people prefer to eat Sweet dumplings. the whole familes stay in the house together to make Sweet dumplings . Sweet dumpling represent the reunions of the family. people will go to Street to see lanterns. Street has so many beautiful lanterns. people are very happy because they can get together.
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1L 是高手哦,至少比我写的强,羞愧的匿了
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