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题目：It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
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People’s impression about countryside usually turns out to be peaceful and picturesque. Birds sing in the forests in the mountains; vast farmlands stretch out the huge plains; happy farmers and their cattle whistle along the winding paths beside the tranquil lakes… It seems that countryside is a nice place to stay in, but this does not necessarily mean that it is a good place for bringing up a child. In fact, it is better for children to grow up in a metropolis rather than in the countryside.
First of all, the residential density in large cities is usually greater than that in the countryside. If a child is brought up in a big city, then he will get to know more people in the neighborhood. Therefore, he will have more chance to communicate to people. His language abilities will thus begin to develop earlier than other kids of the same age. I was brought up in a densely resided neighborhood in a big city. Since lots of my neighbors love talking to me and playing with me, I learned to talk at an early age. I was able to handle my mother-tongue much more skillfully than my peers when I was two years old; when I became a schoolgirl, I did much better in language subjects than my classmates. In comparison, my cousin, who has grown up in the countryside where he had less chance to talk to people in his childhood, does not do as well as I in language courses and sometimes is unconfident when talking to people. This clearly indicates that living in big cities can do a lot of good to the development of a child’s language abilities.
Secondly, children that are brought up in cities usually have more spare time. Since large cities usually possess a well-functioned transportation system, children that live in large cities need not spend too much time on their way to school, which means they can spend more time on schoolwork and extracurricular activities. They will have plenty of time to join in school club activities or having sports. However, children that live in the countryside have to spend a long time on the way to school, even if they take a shuttle-bus. They will, comparatively, have less spare time than those children from large cities.
Some people may argue that the beautiful scenery of the countryside will help children develop love and curiosity for nature and a sense of environment protection. However, large cities are usually equipped with nice parks with various types of plants and animals. By visiting the parks frequently, children that live in large cities will also learn to be concerned about the nature. Meanwhile, they can learn about more species of creatures in the well-designed parks of cities, which offers them a better understanding of the nature.
To sum up, it is better for children to grow up in cities instead of the countryside. The children that have grown up in large cities will be capable of combating the upcoming challenges and will have a promising future.
题目：It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
正文：
People’s impression about countryside usually turns out to be peaceful and picturesque. Birds sing in the forests in the mountains; vast farmlands stretch out the huge plains; happy farmers and their cattle whistle along the winding paths beside the tranquil lakes… It seems that countryside is a nice place to stay in, but this does not necessarily mean that it is a good place for bringing up a child. In fact, it is better for children to grow up in a metropolis rather than in the countryside.
First of all, the residential density in large cities is usually greater than that in the countryside. If a child is brought up in a big city, then he will get to know more people in the neighborhood. Therefore, he will have more chance to communicate to people. His language abilities will thus begin to develop earlier than other kids of the same age. I was brought up in a densely resided neighborhood in a big city. Since lots of my neighbors love talking to me and playing with me, I learned to talk at an early age. I was able to handle my mother-tongue much more skillfully than my peers when I was two years old; when I became a schoolgirl, I did much better in language subjects than my classmates. In comparison, my cousin, who has grown up in the countryside where he had less chance to talk to people in his childhood, does not do as well as I in language courses and sometimes is unconfident when talking to people. This clearly indicates that living in big cities can do a lot of good to the development of a child’s language abilities.
Secondly, children that are brought up in cities usually have more spare time. Since large cities usually possess a well-functioned transportation system, children that live in large cities need not spend too much time on their way to school, which means they can spend more time on schoolwork and extracurricular activities. They will have plenty of time to join in school club activities or having sports. However, children that live in the countryside have to spend a long time on the way to school, even if they take a shuttle-bus. They will, comparatively, have less spare time than those children from large cities.
Some people may argue that the beautiful scenery of the countryside will help children develop love and curiosity for nature and a sense of environment protection. However, large cities are usually equipped with nice parks with various types of plants and animals. By visiting the parks frequently, children that live in large cities will also learn to be concerned about the nature. Meanwhile, they can learn about more species of creatures in the well-designed parks of cities, which offers them a better understanding of the nature.
To sum up, it is better for children to grow up in cities instead of the countryside. The children that have grown up in large cities will be capable of combating the upcoming challenges and will have a promising future.
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My Dream
I have ever many dreams.
Three days ago our families decided to visit the Great Wall.
Today we met at the bus stop early in the morning. When we were on the bus, we saw a lot of new buildings and new shops.Beijing was taller than before, I thought.
It took us about two hours to get to the Great Wall. When the Great Wall appeared in front of us, we could not help thinking how wonderful it is! I wondered how the people in the past built it without modem machines. It is said you can see it from the space.I was proud of it.
After coming home I made up my mind to study harder than before. When I grow up, I will work hard to make our country more beautiful and stronger.
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I have ever many dreams.
Three days ago our families decided to visit the Great Wall.
Today we met at the bus stop early in the morning. When we were on the bus, we saw a lot of new buildings and new shops.Beijing was taller than before, I thought.
It took us about two hours to get to the Great Wall. When the Great Wall appeared in front of us, we could not help thinking how wonderful it is! I wondered how the people in the past built it without modem machines. It is said you can see it from the space.I was proud of it.
After coming home I made up my mind to study harder than before. When I grow up, I will work hard to make our country more beautiful and stronger.
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大哥 这个我百度一搜就搜到了.. 不好意思哈
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请问，百度上搜到的，是谁写的？
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看你要什么难度的啊 最简单的 可以是自我介绍啊 什么的啊 所以 最好给个 限度。。
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tom的家乡被水淹没了，我写封信安慰他
Dear Tom,
How are you ?I'm sorry to hear that your hometown ruined by the flood from the newspaper.
I know you must be very upset but please cheer up .life is going on ,so you take a good attitude to rebuild your hometown.Though there are so many difficulties,please believe nothing is impossible if we put our hearts into it and I will be very happy when I can help you .The hardtime has went by ,we should cherish the future life .
Please past my concern on to your parents
your sincerely
Xiao Li
Dear Tom,
How are you ?I'm sorry to hear that your hometown ruined by the flood from the newspaper.
I know you must be very upset but please cheer up .life is going on ,so you take a good attitude to rebuild your hometown.Though there are so many difficulties,please believe nothing is impossible if we put our hearts into it and I will be very happy when I can help you .The hardtime has went by ,we should cherish the future life .
Please past my concern on to your parents
your sincerely
Xiao Li
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是有主题的 作文 不是写信啊。还有么~
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