Question

求英语达人帮忙翻译下这段自我评价！！！！！！采用的答案追加悬赏！！！！！！！跪谢！！！！！！

我性格较外向，乐于助人，有很强的责任心。我是个初出茅庐的新人，工作中多少有不足的地方，但我会虚心学习向人请教，使自己尽快的锻炼成长起来，在企业中体现出自己的价值。我爱动脑筋，喜欢创新，团队意识感强烈。虽然现在我的工作经验尚浅，但我相信通过自身的努力和工作中前辈们的提点我可以很快对我的工作掌握好，也能发挥出很好的水平。我会不断地提高完善自己，我也相信自己的能力会在工作中得到更好的体现。

Answer 1

这个自我评价总体看起来结构比较凌乱，帮你整理一下结构。
第一部分介绍一下你的个人概况；
第二部分介绍你个人的工作态度以及你的工作特长；
第三部分阐明一下你对未来的期待与展望。
I am xx years old,born in xx province . I was graduated from xx university, my major is xx,
and I got my bachelor degree after my graduation in the year of xx. I spend most of my time on study ,and I have acquired basic knowledge of my major during my school time. (介绍你的过去情况）I'm an outing person ,it's my pleasure to help others,the most important I have a sense of responsibility.(个人概况）
After graduated till now,I am still a rookie(新秀）to the work ,so I have a large space to improve myself.Fortunately ,I will learn to my boss ,colleagues and the people that around me.Then ,I may grow up in an enterprise as soon as possible,my value will reflect to the enterprise completely.I'm in favor of thinking angd creating，also I have a huge sense of team work.So ,I can get along well with my colleagues,I will try to bring mor benefits to my company.
I believe I can make a good performance in the following days. I'm confident that I can succeed. With my hard work and the help of my boss and colleagues,I will adapt to the work quickly.Just trust me ,I will have a great performance in my work,I have the ability.
个人意见，希望能够帮助你。

Answer 2

Icharacter than outgoing, helpful, have a strong sense of responsibility. I am a cub newcomer, how much work is the insufficient place, but I will learn to consult, make oneself of the exercise grow up as soon as possible, in the enterprise reflects their value. I love your head, like innovation, team consciousness are strong. Although now I work experience is shallow, but I believe through own efforts to work with and the elder people raise a point I can quickly grasp of my work, also can play a very good level. I have to constantly improve the perfect, I also believe in your ability will work in better reflect.
THANKyou.