Question

求一篇高中英语作文！

假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。
　　I'm the mother of a fourteen-year-old. I have a rule for my daughter: be among the top 5 students or get punished in one wayor another. She has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong?
　　写作要点：
　　1.表明自己的看法；
　　2.陈述自己的理由（可举例说明）；
　　3.提出至少两条建议
速度！不要范文！自己写的！

Answer 1

Dear Tiger Mom,
Hello.This is Mr White,a counsellor from XXX Junior Middle School.I read your blog on the Internet two days ago.I don't agree with your idea about your daughter's study.You require your daughter to be among the top five students of her class or she will be punished.I suppose that this is not scientisfic or fair.On one hand,as we can see,a student's grades depend on his or her gift except his or her hard work.Some students make every effort,but can't achieve high grades.So it is not right to judge a student only by the grade he gets.On the other,such a rule may put much pressure on her,causing things to go worse.
Why not make a change? Just comunicate with her and encourage her to work hard instead of any rule.I believe she will make progress in the days to come.
Regards
Yours
Counsellor,White

Answer 2

Hi，TigerMom，
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating syudents and their future university admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude school never be ignored.There are many examples around us.Some all-A student in school have turned out not to be ac successful in society as they were expected.The reason is often that the pressure from their parents alloes them almost no time for other activities.Furthermore,purishment is by no means a wise choise to help them grow up mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends’advice.More importansly,let her live like a lovely girl;let her have more friends and social activities;and let her make takes of her own as we teenagers often do.