Question

修改下语法错误 谢谢。急求

Today I talk about a film whose name is <I'm with Cancer > . It is based on Will Reiser's autobiography which has the same name . [Adam] is a 27-year-old radio planner.He was diagnosed with a rare form of cancer. With the help of his friend [Kyle], his mother and the young Psychological therapist [Katherine], [Adam] finally had a new awareness of himself,as well as the most important people and events in his life.He was positive about anting cancer and overcome the disease . So ,we should have an positive attitude to difficulties,then you will beat them.And every coin has two sides .We usually see one side of coin, but we are so lucky to see the other side of the coin by walking pass death.

Answer 1

I want to talk share a film named "I'm with Cancer" with everyone. It is based on Will Reiser's autobiography which has the same name . [Adam] is a 27-year-old radio planner.He was diagnosed with a rare form of cancer. With help of his friend [Kyle], his mother and the young Psychological therapist [Katherine], [Adam] finally had a new awareness of himself, as the most important people and events in his life.He has positive attitude anting cancer and overcome the disease . So ,we should have a positive attitude,then you will beat difficulties. And every coin has two sides .We usually see one side of coin, but we are so lucky to see the other side of the coin by walking pass death.

逗号之前都要用连词，否侧就改成句号
我刚去加拿大的时候也经常犯这样的错误

还有，开头一般要强调YOU，不是I

加油

Answer 2

No problem

Answer 3

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