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MyStupidWonderfulRoommateIsawherinthedormitorywhenIfirstcametothecollege.Honestly,att...
My Stupid Wonderful Roommate
I saw her in the dormitory when I first came to the college.Honestly, at the first sight of her, I felt quite disappointed. I could not imagine that I would spend 4 years with such a dull roommate. She was short and thin, with a round oily face and a pair of deep-set eyes in which there was nothing but sorrow. Besides, she worn a pigtail but her hair was messy and greasy. What surprised me most was that she was dressed in a thick coat in such a hot summer. I worked up the courage to step in the dorm. She was still sitting there without say "Hello!” to me as if she had not noticed me.” How strange and impolite she is!” I thought. I could not bear the embarrassing atmosphere, so I went out to buy articles for daily use as soon as i laid down my things.
To my astonishment, when I came back in the evening, the dirty and untidy room became neat and clean. All her clothes was washed and hung on the string. I came to realize that she was not as lousy as I thought. At least, she was very diligent. Therefore, I took the initiative to talk with her. During the conversation I found that she was an innocent and lovely girl. I began to like her. Afterwards, we often stick together. Nearly everyday I can find some of her advantages. When she is studying, she is very quite; when we debate something, she is rather talkative; besides, she is very honest and frank. If she indeed does something wrong, she will admit her mistake and correct it. If I do something improper, she will point it out directly. Most importantly, she is so kind and she is always ready to help others. Every time she meets beggars in the street ,she will give them some money; If I come back late, she will get hot water for me; If I feel sick, she will buy some medicine and food for me, etc.
I cannot list all her merits one by one. In short, she is the best roommate I have ever had. Now we have become best friends, even though we have little in common either in personality or in hobby. I am like the summer. She is like the autumn. However, we can change the winter into spring. It is because of her that I believe friends can be more reliable than lovers.
I feel lucky to meet her. Thanks god for sending the stupid wonderful girl to me! 展开
I saw her in the dormitory when I first came to the college.Honestly, at the first sight of her, I felt quite disappointed. I could not imagine that I would spend 4 years with such a dull roommate. She was short and thin, with a round oily face and a pair of deep-set eyes in which there was nothing but sorrow. Besides, she worn a pigtail but her hair was messy and greasy. What surprised me most was that she was dressed in a thick coat in such a hot summer. I worked up the courage to step in the dorm. She was still sitting there without say "Hello!” to me as if she had not noticed me.” How strange and impolite she is!” I thought. I could not bear the embarrassing atmosphere, so I went out to buy articles for daily use as soon as i laid down my things.
To my astonishment, when I came back in the evening, the dirty and untidy room became neat and clean. All her clothes was washed and hung on the string. I came to realize that she was not as lousy as I thought. At least, she was very diligent. Therefore, I took the initiative to talk with her. During the conversation I found that she was an innocent and lovely girl. I began to like her. Afterwards, we often stick together. Nearly everyday I can find some of her advantages. When she is studying, she is very quite; when we debate something, she is rather talkative; besides, she is very honest and frank. If she indeed does something wrong, she will admit her mistake and correct it. If I do something improper, she will point it out directly. Most importantly, she is so kind and she is always ready to help others. Every time she meets beggars in the street ,she will give them some money; If I come back late, she will get hot water for me; If I feel sick, she will buy some medicine and food for me, etc.
I cannot list all her merits one by one. In short, she is the best roommate I have ever had. Now we have become best friends, even though we have little in common either in personality or in hobby. I am like the summer. She is like the autumn. However, we can change the winter into spring. It is because of her that I believe friends can be more reliable than lovers.
I feel lucky to meet her. Thanks god for sending the stupid wonderful girl to me! 展开
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我的好室友我看见她在宿舍时，我第一次来到大学的。老实说，当我第一次看见她，我感到很失望。我无法想象我会花4年，这样枯燥的室友。她又矮又瘦，有一个圆形油面和一双深陷的眼睛，那里只有悲伤。此外，她戴着猪尾但她的头发凌乱和油腻。最让我吃惊的是，她穿了一件厚外套在这样一个炎热的夏天。我鼓起勇气走在宿舍。她还坐在那里没有说“你好！“我为她没注意到我。”她是多么的奇怪和不礼貌的！“我认为。我不能忍受尴尬的气氛，所以我去买日用品，只要我放下了我的东西。我的惊讶，当我晚上回来，肮脏和凌乱的房间变得干净整齐。她所有的衣服都洗了挂在绳子。我意识到她不是因为糟糕的如我所想。至少，她很勤奋。因此，我采取了主动和她说话。在谈话的过程中我发现她是一个纯洁可爱的女孩。我开始喜欢她。后来，我们经常在一起。几乎每天都可以找到一些她的优点。当她学习，她非常安静；当我们讨论的东西，她很健谈；此外，她很诚实和坦率。如果她确实做错了，她会承认自己的错误并改正它。如果我做了什么不当，她会直接指出来。最重要的是，她是如此善良和乐于助人。每当她遇到乞丐在街上，她会给他们一些钱；如果我回来晚了，她将得到热水给我；如果我感到不舒服，她要买一些药食我，等。我不能一一列出所有她的优点。总之，她是我有过最好的室友。现在我们成了最好的朋友，虽然我们很少有共同爱好或性格。我喜欢夏天。她喜欢秋天。但是，我们可以改变冬天变成春天。这是因为她，我相信朋友可以更可靠，比情人。我很幸运遇见她。感谢上帝派遣我愚蠢的女孩！
我的好室友我看见她在宿舍时，我第一次来到大学的。老实说，当我第一次看见她，我感到很失望。我无法想象我会花4年，这样枯燥的室友。她又矮又瘦，有一个圆形油面和一双深陷的眼睛，那里只有悲伤。此外，她戴着猪尾但她的头发凌乱和油腻。最让我吃惊的是，她穿了一件厚外套在这样一个炎热的夏天。我鼓起勇气走在宿舍。她还坐在那里没有说“你好！“我为她没注意到我。”她是多么的奇怪和不礼貌的！“我认为。我不能忍受尴尬的气氛，所以我去买日用品，只要我放下了我的东西。我的惊讶，当我晚上回来，肮脏和凌乱的房间变得干净整齐。她所有的衣服都洗了挂在绳子。我意识到她不是因为糟糕的如我所想。至少，她很勤奋。因此，我采取了主动和她说话。在谈话的过程中我发现她是一个纯洁可爱的女孩。我开始喜欢她。后来，我们经常在一起。几乎每天都可以找到一些她的优点。当她学习，她非常安静；当我们讨论的东西，她很健谈；此外，她很诚实和坦率。如果她确实做错了，她会承认自己的错误并改正它。如果我做了什么不当，她会直接指出来。最重要的是，她是如此善良和乐于助人。每当她遇到乞丐在街上，她会给他们一些钱；如果我回来晚了，她将得到热水给我；如果我感到不舒服，她要买一些药食我，等。我不能一一列出所有她的优点。总之，她是我有过最好的室友。现在我们成了最好的朋友，虽然我们很少有共同爱好或性格。我喜欢夏天。她喜欢秋天。但是，我们可以改变冬天变成春天。这是因为她，我相信朋友可以更可靠，比情人。我很幸运遇见她。感谢上帝派遣我愚蠢的女孩！
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