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帮忙改正翻译（中文-英文），急急急，在线等待。

请对如下翻译加以润色，并尽量给予细节改正。有经验者请传授方法和意见。谢谢！

原文：公司为国有牛奶生产厂家，主营产品为**常温牛奶、低温牛奶。公司任职期间主要负责常温牛奶传统渠道的经销商开发与管理工作，每月把经销商的各单品销量及时反馈上海总公司常温事业部。与经销商做好销售方面的沟通，了解市场行情，促进经销商完成订单任务，同时积极开拓空白市场有潜质的经销商。
翻译：We are a state-owned milk manufacturer, mainly producing standard temperature and low temperature milk. During this period, we are responsible for the developing and management work of dealer which is from standard temperature milk traditional approach, and monthly give feedbacks to Standard Dep. of headquarter in Shanghai about sales volume of each unit. In addition we need to regularly communicate with dealers about sales, research the market, help dealers finish order tasks, meanwhile actively develop potential customers.

Answer 1

公司为国有牛奶生产厂家，主营产品为**常温牛奶、低温牛奶。
Company for the state-owned milk production factory, the main product is * * normal temperature milk, low temperature milk.

公司任职期间主要负责常温牛奶传统渠道的经销商开发与管理工作，每月把经销商的各单品销量及时反馈上海总公司常温事业部。
During his company is mainly responsible for the normal temperature of the traditional channel milk distributor development and the supervisory work, the distributor of a month each single product sales feedback at Shanghai head office department.

与经销商做好销售方面的沟通，了解市场行情，促进经销商完成订单任务，同时积极开拓空白市场有潜质的经销商。
And the dealer to communicate in sales, understand the market, promote the dealer task to complete the order, and actively explore the market potential of dealers blank.

Answer 2

Company for the state-owned milk production factory, the main product is * * normal temperature milk, low temperature milk. During his company is mainly responsible for the normal temperature of the traditional channel milk distributor development and the supervisory work, the distributor of a month each single product sales feedback at Shanghai head office department. And the dealer to communicate in sales, understand the market, promote the dealer task to complete the order, and actively explore the market potential of dealers blank.

Answer 3

We are a state-owned milk manufacturer, main product is * * normal temperature milk, low temperature milk. we are mainly responsible the development and the management of the traditional channel dealer of normal temperature milk. everymoth, we need feedback the sales of each single produce to the normal temperature milk department in Shanghai headoffice ,communicate with distributors about the sales, investigate market, promote the dealer to complete the order, and actively develop the dealers with market potential

Answer 4

Company for the state-owned milk production factory, the main product is * * milk milk at low temperature during his company is mainly responsible for the normal temperature of the traditional channel milk distributor development and the supervisory work, the distributor of a month each single product sales feedback the Shanghai normal temperature division and the dealer to head office in sales of communication, understanding market, promote the dealer task to complete the order, and actively explore the market potential of dealers blank

Answer 5

是很好的呀

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里面肯定有错误啊，翻译的肯定也不是最好的呀！帮忙指正哈！