Question

求高手英文改错

Dear Jack,   I accepted your letter yesterday and I was very glad to hear your success in your examination. You are always doing good in your lessons .I just finished a trip to the countryside that my grandparents live. Much to my joy, my grandparents were all in good health.Besides, I met a lot of friends I hadn't seen for age. You cannot imagine what happy I was when  I met them there. We went to fishing in the afternoon and chat in the evening .It has been five years though I moved to this city with my parents, but I still remember the days when I stayed with my friends in the countryside.  How is your holiday?Looking forward to your reply.                                                                                                                        Yours                                                                                                                      Li Hua本文共有十个错误，每个错误涉及一个单词。谢谢

Answer 1

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再看时发现另一个错误

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(1) I ‘accepted’ -> I received
(2) ‘hear’ your success -> hear of your success
如果不可加字:hear 改为 know
(3) doing 'good' -> doing well
(4) my grandparents ‘were’ -> are
(5) for ‘age’ -> for ages
(6) countryside‘ that’ -> countryside where
(7) ‘what’ happy -> how happy
(8) went ‘to’ fishing -> went fishing
(9) ‘chat’ -> chatted
(10) five years ‘though’ -> five years since