请帮我修改一下英语作文,找一下语法错误谢谢。

讲城市和乡村生活的区别。好处坏处和共同点。lifeinacityisverycomfortable,therehaskindsofrestroundsandapartme... 讲城市和乡村生活的区别。好处坏处和共同点。

life in a city is very comfortable , there has kinds of restrounds and apartments around the city 。 we can go anywhere by car , taxi or bus。 on weekends, we often go to the park to relaxed。 city life is not only very conventied but also very comfortable 。

country life has some differences to city life。 people who in the country have to work everday ,they(自己做饭种菜怎么说 - -。) by themself。 If they want to visit their neighborhood , thy only can ride bicycle or by foot 。

Through there are many differences between city life and country life,there are some (相同点怎么说 - -.) too.

共同点要写不同点, 提示词 是getting better , keeping fit

I woud like city life rather than country life, because i prefer to have a comfortable life。
展开
Ryoma123
2011-12-11 · TA获得超过782个赞
知道小有建树答主
回答量:466
采纳率:100%
帮助的人:238万
展开全部
1.life in a city is very comfortable , there has kinds of restrounds and apartments around the city.
(...., there are many kinds of restaurants)
2.we can go anywhere by car , taxi or bus。 on weekends, we often go to the park to relaxed.
(..., to relax (to 后接V原)
3.city life is not only very conventied but also very comfortable.
(用not only 引导倒装会更好 Not only is city life very conventied but it also very comfortable).
4. country life has some differences to city life(介词to改为from)
5.自己做饭种菜They plant and cook by themselves
6. on foot 走路
7,共同点 With the development of technology and society, life both in cities and countries are getting better. They can affoard to attend school and hospital. What's more, there are many fitness facilities for them keeping fit regularly.
中醫學生MM
2011-12-11 · TA获得超过1.8万个赞
知道大有可为答主
回答量:8746
采纳率:18%
帮助的人:3454万
展开全部
Life in a city is very convenient. There are various kinds of restaurants and apartments in the city 。 We can go anywhere by car , taxi or bus。 On weekends, we can go to the park to relax。 City life is not only convenient but also very comfortable 。If we have money, materials and services are readily available.

On the other hand, country life is a bit different。 Country people have to work everyday ,they have to grow food for themselves and cook their own meals。 If they want to visit other people living afar , they can only ride bicycle or on foot 。

Though there are many differences between city life and country life,there are some common points too. People can keep fit no matter where they live. People in the city can do exercise in parks or in gymnasiums while country people can exercise through their daily life.
People receive equal education opportunity no matter they live in city or in country.

However, I would prefer city life than country life because I prefer to have a more comfortable life。
本回答被提问者采纳
已赞过 已踩过<
你对这个回答的评价是?
评论 收起
花果山个人160
2011-12-11 · TA获得超过1.4万个赞
知道大有可为答主
回答量:2896
采纳率:100%
帮助的人:1289万
展开全部
life in a city is very comfortable , there are kinds of restrounds and apartments around the city 。 we can go anywhere by car , taxi or bus。 on weekends, we often go to the park to relax ourselves。city life is not only very convenient but also very comfortable 。
country life has some differences from city life。 people who in the country have to work everday ,they cook their meals(自己做饭种菜)by themself。 If they want to visit their neighborhood , they only can ride bicycle or by foot 。
Through there are many differences between city life and country life,there are some same points(相同点) too.

共同点要写不同点, 提示词 是getting better , keeping fit

I woud like city life rather than country life, because i prefer to have a comfortable life。
已赞过 已踩过<
你对这个回答的评价是?
评论 收起
收起 更多回答(1)
推荐律师服务: 若未解决您的问题,请您详细描述您的问题,通过百度律临进行免费专业咨询

为你推荐:

下载百度知道APP,抢鲜体验
使用百度知道APP,立即抢鲜体验。你的手机镜头里或许有别人想知道的答案。
扫描二维码下载
×

类别

我们会通过消息、邮箱等方式尽快将举报结果通知您。

说明

0/200

提交
取消

辅 助

模 式