Question

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Once there was a farmer who has a dog of his own .One day he went his friend's party , At the party , he met an old friend of him . They talked a lot and them had a good drink of wine .They drank too many and soon got drunk.Before the party when the farmer returned back home ,he became so drunk that he vomited what he had eaten. The dog ate up what its owner had vomited.After a while,a dog became drunk,too.New neither the dog or its owner could stand up and they laydown side by side on the ground but soon

Answer 1

1.Once there was a farmer who has a dog of his own。has改成had，时态不对，
2.One day he went his friend's party 。在went后添加to。
3.They talked a lot and them had a good drink of wine 去掉them
4.They drank too many,many改成much
5.Before the party，Before改成After
6.Before the party when the farmer returned back home 去掉back或者returned改成came
7.After a while，After 改成For，一会儿用for awhile表示
8.New neither the dog or its owner could stand up ，New应该是Now，你打错了。or改成nor，表示既不也不
9.they laydown side 。去掉they，并列句，前面有主语
其实我觉得还有个错误Once there was a farmer who has a dog of his own ，应该去掉
of his own
就这样吧，只看出这么多，看满意不？

Answer 2

Once there was a farmer who has（had） a dog of his own .One day he went for his friend's party , At the party , he met an old friend of him . They talked a lot and them(they) had a good drink of wine .They drank too many(much) and soon got drunk.Before the party when(删除,或者你打错了) the farmer returned back home ,he became so drunk that he vomited what he had eaten. The dog ate up what its owner had vomited.After a while,a（the）dog became drunk,too.New neither the dog or(nor) its owner could stand up and they laydown side by side on the ground but soon

Answer 3

补充一个，he met an old friend of him. him 改成his.