Question

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Last summer,I invited to a summer camp in America. I had great time there because I made many friends from other than countries.There were many different kinds of activities.In a party,we take turns to talk about our own country.But I was so shy to speak before other people. I stood there for five minutes without said anything.It was very embarrassed.When I finally opened my mouth, someone couldn't help laugh at my poor spoken English. I could feel almost anything except that my face was burning.It was then I decided to speaking English.

Answer 1

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Last summer, I (加入was) invited to a summer camp in America. I had (加入a) great time there because I made many friends from other (去掉than) countries.There were many different kinds of activities. In a party, we (took) turns to talk about our own (countries). But I was (too) shy to speak before other people. I stood there for five minutes without (saying) anything. It was very (embarrassing). When I finally opened my mouth, someone couldn't help (laughing) at my poor spoken English. I (couldn't) feel almost anything except that my face was burning. It was then (加入that) I decided to (speak) English.

Answer 2

Last summer, I (加入was) invited to a summer camp in America. I had (加入a) great time there because I made many friends from other (去掉than) countries.There were many different kinds of activities. In a party, we (took) turns to talk about our own (countries). But I was (too) shy to speak before other people. I stood there for five minutes without (saying) anything. It was very (embarrassing). When I finally opened my mouth, someone couldn't help (laughing) at my poor spoken English. I (couldn't) feel almost anything except that my face was burning. It was then (加入that) I decided to (speak) English.

Answer 3

Last summer,I was invited to a summer camp in America. I had a great time there because I made many friends from other countries.There were many different kinds of activities.In the party,we took turns to talk about our own country.But I was so shy to speak before other people. I stood there for five minutes without said anything.I was very embarrassed.Finally, when I opened my mouth, someone did not laugh at my poor English speaking.. I could feel almost anything except that my face was burning.Then I was I decided to practise speaking English.

Answer 4

last summer, i was invited to a summer camp in america.I had a great time there because i made friends from other countries. there were many different kinds of actvities. in the party ,we took turns to talk about our own countries. but i was too shy to speak before other people. i stood there for 5 minutes without saying anything. it was very embarrassing. when i finally opened my mouth, someone couldnot help laugh at my poor spoken english. i could not feel anything except that my face was burning.
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