Question

请英语高手帮忙看看有没有语法错误，非常感谢。

1.事实上，今年将有更多的旅游者光临我市。
As the matter of fact ,there will be more tourists visting our city in this year.
2.事实上，我们正在探讨如何扩大产品的销售量。
As the matter of fact,we are discussing how to inprove the quantity of the sale .
3.收到礼物时一定要表达感谢。
Make sure you can give an appreciation when you receive a gift .
4.如果想表达合作的意愿，你最好亲自去趟公司。
If you want to express the willing of cooperation ,you'd better go to the company.

Answer 1

1.事实上，今年将有更多的旅游者光临我市。
As a matter of fact ,there will be more tourists to visit our city in this year.
2.事实上，我们正在探讨如何扩大产品的销售量。
As a matter of fact,we are discussing how to inprove the quantity of the sale .
3.收到礼物时一定要表达感谢。
Make sure you can give appreciation when you receive a gift .
4.如果想表达合作的意愿，你最好亲自去趟公司。
If you want to express the willing of cooperation ,you'd better go to the company by yourself.

Answer 2

1.as a matter of fact 这是一个固定短语，this year就是今年，不用加in，就像今天today一样，直接用就可以了，前面不用再加介词。
2.提高是improve
3.这里虽没有提到主语，但翻译的时候要加上。
4.“亲自”没有翻译出来，in person 或者by yourself都可以

Answer 3

第二个sale应该改成sales
第三个表达上有点别扭，更好的表达是You should be grateful when you receive a gift.
其他都没有问题，希望能帮助到你。

Answer 4

1.事实上，今年将有更多的旅游者光临我市。
As a matter of fact ,there will be more tourists visting our city this year.
2.事实上，我们正在探讨如何扩大产品的销售量。
As a matter of fact,we are discussing how to improve the quantity of the sale .
3.收到礼物时一定要表达感谢。
you must express your appreciation when you receive a gift .
4.如果想表达合作的意愿，你最好亲自去趟公司。
If you want to express the willing of cooperation ,you'd better go to the company yourself

Answer 5

As the matter of fact是不是题目给定的，不是的话用“in fact”