Question

帮我检查下这段英文。 O(∩_∩)O谢谢

明天参加中学英语特长生选拔赛,
这是我编的开场白 帮我检查看看有没有语法错误 谢啦~

Well,it's my time!Good afrernoon,fist of all,let me in introduce myself,my name is XX,and I from XX school,today I'm so glad to sing my favorite song for you,I hope you will like my voices.Thank you.

Answer 1

Well,Good afrernoon,first of all,let me introduce myself,my name is XX,and I am from XX school,today I'm so glad to sing my favorite song for you,I hope you will like my voices.Thank you.

Answer 2

修改后：
Well,it's my turn!Good afrernoon,fist of all,let me introduce myself,my name is XX,and I am from XX school,today I'm so glad to sing my favorite song for you,I hope you like my voices.Thank you.

Answer 3

语法应该是没问题的

Answer 4

Well,it's my time!Good afrernoon,fist of all,let me introduce myself,my name is XX,and i come from XX school,today I'm so glad to sing my favorite song for you,I hope you will like my voice.Thank you