Question

英语写作

假如你叫李华，在本学期，你的网友Mary 不仅帮助你学习英语，还与你畅谈未来职业，给予你极大的鼓励，为此你在学期末打算给她写一封感谢信。

要求，100字左右，不要求格式，我这有了。

Answer 1

Dear Mary,
How are you.
I'm writing this letter to express my heartfelt appreciation of what you have done for me over the past semester. As a friend online, you have not only helped me a lot in improving my English skills, but also had many candid discussions with me about my future plan for career development. To tell you the truth, I feel so encouraged by our online chatting that I now have full confidence in my success after graduation.
I'm really lucky to bump into a good and true friend like you in the virtual world of the Internet. I hope we can keep this beautiful friendship for a lifetime. And in the future, if you need any kind of help from me, just tell me. I promise I will do my best to assist you, just as you did for me.
Keep in touch. Wish you every success in life and career!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

给的素材太少，也只能写这么多了，不过100字肯定超过了。请放心采用。
对了，别忘了给我前几天做的完型填空采用加分哦。
祝圣诞新年快乐。

追问

还有一个改错 http://zhidao.baidu.com/question/358705445.html?quesup1&oldq=1那个完型我现在去看

追答

奇怪，我明明已经回答了你的改错题，当时看也贴上了，现在却答案消失了，而且也无法再回答了。晕。算了，给你贴在这里好了：

I was late for class again （in删掉） this morning ,It was the six(th) time I had been late for class ,so I was ask(ed) to go to Miss Wang's office after school.(She) said: "Angthing you repeat twenty times is yours forever.Saying no to a bad habit is not enough.We should replace it with (a) good one .If any behaviour ,good (or) bad ,is often repeated, it becomes stronger and less powerful (此处逻辑不同，到底更强还是更弱，只能留一个）."Hearing what Miss Wang said, I came to realiz(e) I was wrong,I've made up my mind(s删掉） to get up early in the morning,and I'll never be late for class again.I believe （how删掉） I can make it.

具体修改都在括号里。
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