Question

【求助】请帮忙看下这个英语句子有无错误，谢谢！

As is vividly depicted above, on the road tumbles an old man, asking the passers-by to give him a helping hand, with his legs badly hurt.

Answer 1

建议改两处：
1、去掉help，用give sb a hand即可。
另外，向某人寻求帮助，用ask sb for help即可，比要求某人给予帮助更简洁。
2、腿应该是被伤害，所以用hurted。
As is vividly depicted above, on the road tumbles an old man, asking the passers-by for help, with his legs badly hurted.

Answer 2

句子有好的地方，例如下面的 2、3 和 4。1 是提出需要改动的建议。
1. as 从句可以直接改为用过去分词短语做状语：As vividly depicted above, ...。这样，句子显得更简练；
2. on the road tumbles an old man, 主句很好，用了倒装句形式；
3. asking the passers-by ... 现在分词短语做状语，表示伴随动作；
4. with his leg badly hurt 很好，带 with 的分词短语做状语。

Answer 3

个人并不认为这个句子有错