Question

英语，短文改错（10处）

I first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming over in my place .We listen to my CDs together and soon become best friends. Three years ago ,Li Ming's parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Ming and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there .Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week Li Ming came see me every day. Then his father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven't see each other much. But we've kept writing to each other.

Answer 1

I first met Li Ming ON a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming over TO my place .We LISTENED to my CDs together and soon BECAME best friends. Three years ago ,Li Ming's parents invited ME to spend two wonderful WEEKS in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Ming and I loved walking along the BEAUTIFUL beaches there .Last year I was ill AND had to stay in hospital for a week Li Ming came TO see me every day. Then his father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven't see each other MUCH（这个much去掉）. But we've kept writing to each other.

这个不能改颜色。上面全大写的单词是我改的地方，你自己改成小写吧，最后一个错误是把标注的much去掉。