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英文翻译~~~我们老总是外国人不会说中文，所以我希望可以翻译的准确些 向大家请教下

下面是我自己翻译的 希望英语好的人可以改正一下（）

　UPS是“不间断电源”的缩写，它可以保障计算机在遭遇停电时继续工作，以便使用户紧急存盘，使您不会因停电而丢失数据。
UPS is short for “Uninterruptible Power Supply” ，It can protect the computer continues to operate in the event of power failure ,So that users save an emergency and do not lose data due to power failure.

当我们的电源出现故障时（如停电，跳闸，断电测试，插座松动等）,UPS会自动转换为电池供电状态，并发出“滴～滴～”的警告，如果我们无法确定或保证电力可以在一分钟以内恢复，我们应该保存正在编辑的文档，然后关闭电脑。直到确保电力恢复并稳定以后便可启动计算机。
When the power fails(such as power failure,tripping,power testing,loose sockets,etc.),UPS will automatically switch to battery power status and issued a 'drip~drop~'warning,If we can not determine or ensure the power can be restored in less than a minute,We should save the document being edited,and the shut down the computer.Until power is restored and stabilized to ensure that you can start the computer

Answer 1

UPS是“不间断电源”的缩写，它可以保障计算机在遭遇停电时继续工作，以便使用户紧急存盘，使您不会因停电而丢失数据。
UPS is the acronym of “Uninterruptible Power Supply” .It can protect the computer from losing data caused by power off,and enable the user to save the information before the computer shut off.

当我们的电源出现故障时（如停电，跳闸，断电测试，插座松动等）,UPS会自动转换为电池供电状态，并发出“滴～滴～”的警告，如果我们无法确定或保证电力可以在一分钟以内恢复，我们应该保存正在编辑的文档，然后关闭电脑。直到确保电力恢复并稳定以后便可启动计算机。
When there is power issue such as power failure,tripout,power cut testing,plug loosing ,etc.),UPS will automatically switch to the battery power type,and it will make warning by beeping.If we can not determine or ensure the power can be restored in less than a minute,we should save the working document ,and shut down the computer, then restart the computer when the power comes again.

-------简单修改一下，希望更清晰一些。

Answer 2

UPS is short for “Uninterruptible Power Supply”， it keeps computers working when electric is off, so that users can save urgently instead of loosing the data because of power outages.

When a blackout appears (power cut, trip, outage, socket loose,etc), UPS will automatically switch to battery supply status and warn with stairwell "beep~ beep~ ", if we can`t make sure or guarantee the power could recover in one minute, we should save the documents that were being editing, and turn computers off, After it is assured that power has been recovered and stay stable, computers can be started.

我的意见，不同的地方咱可以讨论~

Answer 3

UPS是“不间断电源”的缩写，它可以保障计算机在遭遇停电时继续工作，以便使用户紧急存盘，使您不会因停电而丢失数据。
UPS is short for “Uninterruptible Power Supply” , it can ensure the computer work on in case of power off, for the purpose of saving data.
以简短为原则，清楚明了，不需要字字对照