求大神帮我改一下英语作文。 With the development of economy, t

求大神帮我改一下英语作文。Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,theenvironmentalpollutionproblemisseriousinc... 求大神帮我改一下英语作文。 With the development of economy, the environmental pollution problem is serious increasingly . Nevertheless air and water pollution affect everyone. In order that we can have a better life. Cities to survive, businesses to make a profit, we must take action. firstly, environmental pollution is a long-term problem. Before the improvement of the environment, we should change our concept of environmental protection. To do these things, teachers and students have to discuss and disseminate the importance of protecting the environment . secondly, city planners take environmental problems into consideration. Only have good environment, the development of the economy is better. thirdly, factories should reduce pollution. The factory is the most main cause environmental pollution. As for thoes pollutions, we must limit the factory emission pollution. In order to have a better future, for the sake of our health, for the sake of what we see in the morning the sun rather than the haze. Starts from me, and protects the environment. 展开
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  随着经济的发展,环境污染问题日益严重。然而,空气和水的污染影响到每个人。为了我们能有更好的生活。城市生存,企业获利,我们必须采取行动。首先,环境污染是一个长期的问题。在环境的改善,我们应该改变我们的环保理念。做这些事情,老师和学生们讨论和宣传保护环境的重要性。其次,城市规划的环境问题需要考虑。只有良好的环境,经济的发展是更好的。第三,工厂应该减少污染。本厂是最主要的原因,环境污染。对于那些污染,我们必须限制工厂排放污染。为了有一个更好的未来,为了我们的健康,为我们所看到的在早晨的太阳而不是阴霾的缘故。从我做起,保护环境。

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serious increasingly改为 increasingly serious

Nevertheless改为 because

In order that we can have a better life. Cities to survive, businesses to make a profit, we must take action. 改为In order to have a better life , beautiful cities to live, good businesses to make a profit, we must take action.

Only have good environment
改为 Only with good environment

The factory is the most main cause environmental pollution.改为 pollutants from factories are the main cause of environment pollution
As for thoes pollutions改为 to do with pollution 解决污染问题

we must limit the factory emission pollution
改为we must set a limit to the factory pollutants emission

for the sake of what改为for the sake of that

Starts from me, and protects the environment.改为let's do it right now, starting from our own.

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