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高手帮忙翻译一下，简单英文自我介绍！谢谢！

开头想好了，麻烦高手帮忙翻译后面的2句，先谢谢了~！这么说，可以吗？会不会不通顺？
Good afternoon!
It's a pleasure to meet you all.
First let me introduce myself.
My name is XXX.I am 22 years old.
我是个开朗的女孩，平时喜欢听歌，看书。
我有过2年的销售经验，希望可以胜任这份工作。
I am a lively girl. I like reading books and listening to music
第一句，这样是对的吗？

Answer 1

I am a open and bright girl, usually likes music, reads. I have had 2 years sales experience, hoped may be competent this work.

希望可以帮到你

Answer 2

i'm a girl who like smiling, reading and listening the music.
i have two years of experience of sale, so i think that this job is very fit to me~~

Answer 3

I am a girl of open minded. I like listening to music and reading books in my spare time. I have rich experience of selling. Should you be willing to take me on trial, I would try my best to fulfill all your requirements.

Answer 4

i am a positive and happy girl,i like listening musics and reading books.i have 2 years sale experiences,i hope my qualities can be competent for this job.
thank you

Answer 5

我今天问了一下我的美国外教老师,他给了我意见

你的介绍要多一点定语从句.例如"I am 22 years old.
我是个开朗的女孩，平时喜欢听歌，看书。
我有过2年的销售经验，希望可以胜任这份工作。"应该做一些分析.具体的翻译参考下面:
I'm a sonsy(开朗的)girl of 22 years old who have
a distribution experiences of 2 years.
sometimes I would like to sang and do some reading and I hope I can be competent for the job

这是我自己整理的翻译顺序,根据你的需要,你可以自己修改一下翻译顺序的