Question

你的笔友李雷刚来信告诉你，他在学习英语的过程中碰到了很多困难，想放弃学习英语。请你给他写一封回信。

Answer 1

先确定问题，在构思思路，最后正确运用语法。

1. How are you? I heard that you think English was very differcult and wanted to give up . Please do not , insist on is victory.It is important for us to learn English ,because English is useful and it is used widely all over the world .

2. I will give you some advise on how to learn English well.First of all, you can listen English songs which you interest.Next ,you should talk with others in English as possible as you can.

3. Don't worry about making mistakes.Lastly,you must listen teacher in class and answer teacher's questions,don't shy.That's all,I believe you can improve you English.                                                                                                       

补充内容：

1. 认真审题立意：文章要有明确的主题，必须具备4个条件：准确、鲜明、深刻、集中。以作文TheEnglishteacherIAdmireMost”为例，文章的主题是关于记叙我最欣赏的一位英语老师，因而就不能泛泛谈论老师这一职业或自己的几位老师。

2. 草拟提纲：文章布局要做好3件事：安排好层次段落，铺设好过渡，处理好开头和结尾。如命题作文中有提示句，还要从提示句的关键词出发，围绕关键词开拓思路，发挥联想，记录下联想到的东西，可以是句子或单词词组，可以是英语或汉语。

3. 写出落主题句，理文章之脉络：一篇短文的段落一般分为引导段、主题段和结尾段。每段的主题句是作者思维的起点。看到段落主题句，读者大致了解段落要阐述的内容。段落主题句通常是一个内容概括、用词简洁明了的单句。

4. 参照提纲，紧扣主题句，完成各段落：有了段落主题句后，还需要顺着段落主题句的方向，参照提纲中的思路，从而完成各个段落。主题段应围绕文章和该段的主题来展开。展开的方式包括：顺序法、举例法、比较法等。可以根据需要任选一种或几种方式。

Answer 2

Dear Lilei How are you? I heard that you think English was very differcult and wanted to give up . Please do not , insist on is victory.It is important for us to learn English ,because English is useful and it is used widely all over the world .I will give you some advise on how to learn English well.First of all, you can listen English songs which you interest.Next ,you should talk with others in English as possible as you can.Don't worry about making mistakes.Lastly,you must listen teacher in class and answer teacher's questions,don't shy.That's all,I believe you can improve you English. Best wishes . Yours XXX