Question

请修改一篇初一英语短文，有错误请在原文改出，一定要仔细！再麻烦大家写一篇一样的短文！

根据提示，写一篇关于姚明生活的短文。
姚明是一名著名的篮球运动员，个子很高。他每天6点起床，6：30和朋友一起跑步，回来后淋浴，8点吃早餐，8：30听音乐，9：00开始训练篮球，12点吃午饭。我们都很喜欢他。
Yao Ming's Day
Yao Ming is great basketball star.He play basketball is very well.He gets up at six o'clock every day.At six thirty he run with his friends.After run,he brushes his teeth and takes a shower.Then he listen to music at eight thirty.Nine o'clock,he play basketball.At twelve o'clock eats lunch.We very like Yao Ming!
千万不要把正确的修改成错误的！！！

Answer 1

Yao Ming is great basketball star------在is后加a
He play basketball is very well----------He playS basketball very well 这句话谓语动词有两个，一个是is一个是play,显然错了，记住单三后动词加s
At six thirty he run with his friends-----he runS---记住单三后动词加s
After run------------------------------------After running,AFTER后用动名词
Then he listen to music at eight thirty---he listens to music
Nine o'clock,he play basketball--------At nine o'clock,he playS basketball
At twelve o'clock eats lunch------------At twelve o'clock he eats lunch
We very like Yao Ming!-----------------We like Yao Ming very much!
错误太多，句式也比较单一，六点半之类的时间表达可采用half past of , to ,past 等
参考一下

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如果可以的话，请再写一篇与上一样的文章。

Answer 2

Yao Ming's Day
Yao Ming is a great basketball player.He plays basketball very well.He gets up at six o'clock every day.and runs with his friends at six thirty .After that,he comes back home to take a shower and has his breakfast.Then he listens to the music at eight thirty.At nine o'clock,he begins to train basketball playingand has his lunch at twelve o'clock.We all like Yaoming a lot.

Answer 3

Yao Ming is a great basketball star.He plays basketball verywell.He gets up at six o'clock every day.At six thirty he runs with his friends.After running,he brushes his tooth and takes a shower.Then he listens to music at eight thirty.Nine o'clock,he plays basketball.At twelve o'clock he has a lunch.We like Yao Ming very much!
一样的短文也是写某某的生活？

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一样的短文，就是根据上面的提示，写一篇也是介绍姚明的：
根据提示，写一篇关于姚明生活的短文。
姚明是一名著名的篮球运动员，个子很高。他每天6点起床，6：30和朋友一起跑步，回来后淋浴，8点吃早餐，8：30听音乐，9：00开始训练篮球，12点吃午饭。我们都很喜欢他。

追答

Yao Ming is a famous basketball player in the world ,whose height is very high.He gets up at six o'clock everyday and then goes to run with some friends at 6：30.After running ,he comes back to takes a shower.After having a breakfast at eight o'clock,he begins to listens to music at 8：30.At nine o'clock,he begins to train basketball at the playingand .when noon arrives,he has a lunch.We all love him very much!

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要初一水平的！

Answer 4

Yao Ming's Day
Yao Ming is a great basketball star.He plays basketball very well.He gets up at six o'clock every day.At six thirty he runs with his friends.After running,he brushes his teeth and takes a shower.Then he listens to music at eight thirty.Nine o'clock,he plays basketball.At twelve o'clock he eats lunch.We very like Yao Ming!注意第三人称单数

Answer 5

Yao Ming's Day
Yao Ming is a great basketball star.He plays basketball very well.He gets up at six o'clock every day.At six thirty he runs with his friends.After running,he brushes his teeth and takes a shower.Then he listens to music at eight thirty.Nine o'clock,he play basketball.At twelve o'clock eats lunch.We like Yao Ming well!

yaoming's day.
yaoming is a famous basketball player who is one of the tallest players around the world .he ofen gets up about six and runs together with his friends,after that he takes a shower and at eight he starts to having breakfast ,also after thirty minutes he always listens to some music to relax himself.he begins to practise basketball at night as well as having lunch at twelve .
from the bottom of our heart,we like him most.