Question

一篇英语的书面表达

假如你的网友JOHN即将外出旅行，请你跟凝聚一下提示用英语给她写一篇电子邮件，向他介绍你对旅游的看法和旅游的注意事项。
1旅游是一件非常好的活动，当你累了或有空的时候，到外地走走，欣赏美景，呼吸新鲜空气，交朋友放松身心，有益健康。
2旅游前的准备，了解天气，带好衣服，相机，常用药品，旅游时注意饮食卫生和安全，防止小偷。

Answer 1

Dear John
I am glad to hear that you're about to go out for traveling.Here,I'd like to tell you my opinion on traveling and something you should know when having a travel.
I think traveling is a great activity because it helps you relax your body and mind.Also,it does good for your health.When you are tired or have some spare time,you can take a walk in another place,appreciate the beautiful scenes while enjoying the fresh air.You may make friends with others when traveling.Isn't it delightful?
But you must get full ready before you set off,too.For example,get to know the weather in where you're going to.you should also take enough clothes,your camera and some medicine in common use.Besides,In your travel you should pay attention to dietetic hygiene and your safety.Don't forget to watch out the thieves.
At last,I hope you'll have a great time!
Yours,xxx

自己打的，度娘有什么可能搜到一模一样的题目嘛……字数貌似稍多了，请酌情压缩吧~不知道有没有语法错误呢

Answer 2

表达什么

追问

你会吗?

追答

不知道，在百度直接搜，应该有的

追问

度娘搜不到。

追答

Dear Weidong
Thank you for your last letter . You asked me to teii you something about my hobbies .well. my biggest hobby is playing basketball . because I love Yaoming .I am proud of him .Of course,I love playing basketball , too.I think it's wonderful !How are you recently? Please return me soon! And tell me about your habbies! Dear Jenny ,
How’s everything ? The winter vacation is coming . I have a plan for a trip . I’m writing to discuss it wth you .
When you come to TaiYuan , I’ll show you around the city . We’ll see the ice sculptures and I’m sure you’ll be deeply impressed . I’ll also take you to the People’s Park . It will be held a dragon lantern exhibition . The lanterns will be bright and colorful in the evening . Then we’ll get to YangQuan by bus where we can visit a lion dances competition . I think you’ll like it . When we’re back in TaiYuan , I’d like you to stay for a couple of days with my family for the Spring Festival .
What do you think of my idea ? If you have any better suggestions , please let me know .
Best regards.
Yours ,
Li Hua 我搜到的，凑和着看吧