Question

【美国大学转学】求一份正规、专业的推荐信英文翻译，好人一生平安。

因为准备申请转学，所以需要自己写一份高中校长推荐信，然后发给校长盖章。

中文心里大概有数，英语却处处写不下去，生怕用词用句不专业，所以特地前来请教各位高手，求翻译一份高中校长推荐信。

大概内容如下：
to whom it may concern:
RE:xxxxxxxxxxx
非常荣幸能够帮助在我校毕业的XXX先生写这份推荐信。人生处处是财富，其中最大的财富也许就是努力与上进等人性闪光点，而X先生正是那些精力充沛的年轻人中善于发现的一员，X先生在我校学习的三年期间，学习成绩一直占据我校前0.5%。X先生是我二十余年教书育人生涯里碰上的为数不多的极有语言天赋的一位，他在高中一年级时就能够流利的讲一口纯正的美语，后来他参加省级的口语比赛，也为本校赢得第三名的好成绩。他的英文老师与语文老师曾不约而同的向我推荐这位学生，我与X先生也在体育课的自由活动时间里交谈了许久，从英语谈到哲学，从物理聊到历史，以一个老师的角度来讲，X先生对于他在课堂上应当所学的知识掌握的炉火纯青，而同时他又好奇的探索这个世界，得到了许多课外的知识。与他交谈让人轻松愉快，而最令人印象深刻的则是他一口纯正的美式口语，流利而自然，完全听不出这是一个从未踏出过中国孩子说出来的英语。在他高二时，来我校支援教学的两位纽约大学毕业生也对他给予高度评价，X先生也与两位外教发展了极深的友谊。总之，X先生是一位难能可贵的年轻人，我也相信他一定会给自己创造一个更美好的未来。
对于X先生在贵校的学习，我抱有十足的信心，他一定会凭借自己的特长在贵校组织参加各项活动，认真的履修完所有课程顺利毕业的。

大概就是这样，谢谢您的时间。如果有改进的意见请您也写上，赚了分来加分感谢您！

Answer 1

楼主加分啊=。=|||||

to whom it may concern:
RE:xxxxxxxxxxx

I am very glad to help Mr. X who is the student that graduated in our university to write this recommendation letter.（+感觉这里加点东西把+） Life is full of wealth, the biggest wealth may be are the efforts and progress.(直译好奇怪的感觉 所以lz自己修改把) Mr. X is the energetic young man who is good at finding them. During three years learning in our school , the academic record has held the top in our school. Mr. X has strong language talent, the first year in high school he can speak English perfectly, that without a English environment. Me and Mr. X talked a lot in free time. In a teacher's point of view, Mr. X in class (。。。。), and while he and curious explore the world, get a lot of extracurricular knowledge. Mr X he is a person who easy get close to, talk to him people will get relax and happy, the most impressive is he had a awesome pronunciation of English, fluent and natural, completely don't recognize this is a never had children out on China said the English. In his school, come to our school to support teaching two New York university graduates also highly of him, Mr. X also and two foreign teachers development the deep friendship. In short, Mr. X is a useful person, I believe that he will make a better future.
For Mr. X in your university study, I have every confidence, he'll be with their own special in your university organization to take part in all kinds of activities, also can finish all our courses to graduate.

楼主求给分+加分啊 翻译了我一晚上的东西 回到正题

表示我英语也只有ESL-EO的水平啊 见谅~~ 太专业 也不好的啦 所以 就这样帮lz改出来了一篇
建议：
1. 建议lz不要写过多得奖或者过多等等 适当加 （*会弄得人家惭愧的）
2. 本人修改后的文章应该还有很多bug lz自行更改（*很想知道 楼主是用谁的口吻写的 我中文不好 看不懂 =3=）

追问

感谢您的热心，但是这很直白的是机译的感觉，如果到截止，还是没人自己翻的话我就把分给你。这个真心用不了，但是还是谢谢你。

Answer 2

To Whom It May Concern:

I’m with great pleasure to recommend Mr. xxx, an excellent graduate of us xxx high school, for your xxx program. Treasures are everywhere in one’s life, while the most precious of them may be the characteristics of being diligent and aspirant, which are the main advantages of Mr. xxx. He had always been the top 0.5% student of school during the high school period, with his long-lasting energetic study. Mr. xxx, as a most talented student in the language field of my knowledge, spoke fluent and pure American English and used to win the third prize of Oral English Competition in xxx Province. I have heard favorable comments of him from his Chinese teacher and his English teacher, and I have also had talks with him myself on the issues of language, history, philosophy, physics, etc. I was amazed by the width of knowledge he had gained, which could come from his curiosity for exploring the world; and talking with him was quite pleasing. In his second year of high school study, there were two graduates of New York University volunteering teaching here, and Mr. xxx developed a deep friendship with them, winning high praises as well. In conclusion, Mr. xxx is a most promising young man who deserves a bright future. Your favorable consideration of his admission will be very much appreciated.

首先祝你申请顺利! 翻译的过程中删了几处我认为枝节和重复的地方.

此外有个问题: 其实俺写英文的时候, 很习惯句与句间都用逻辑连接词来接上, 但这篇短文似乎每句在说不同的事, 没有明显的逻辑或时间上的承接关系? 所以基本也就按照原文来了.

这样的随意的叙述口吻显得很亲切, 但如果考虑到表述的清晰, 也可以在最开始就把后面事例要说明的优点罗列出来, 单为一段. 第二段的事例再跟总述一一对应. 当然最好的还是把它们本身就按逻辑串起来, 该点的点出来. 比如:

"课程学习很优秀, (具体). 同时, 课外知识也很丰富, (具体). 除了知识之外, 他还乐于从交流中学习, (事例). 在交流中, 他出色的英语口语...., (事例)." 类似于这样~~ 供参考! XD

Answer 3

to whom it may concern:
RE:xxxxxxxxxxx

Very honoured to help in our university graduation of Mr. XXX write this recommendation letter. Life is all wealth, one of the biggest wealth may be efforts and progress of human nature and shine through and Mr. X it is the energetic young people are good at finding, and a member of the Mr. X in our school learning of the three-year between, the study result has held the top 0.5% in our school. Mr. X is I more than 20 years teaching career of a few extremely has the language talent a, his first year in high school can speak speak perfect English, and then he took part in the speaking competition at the provincial level, and the third win for the good grades. His English teacher and Chinese teachers had bowed to recommend the students, I and Mr. X in the free movement of physical education is also the time to talk to for a long time, from English talked about philosophy, from physical chat to history, to a teacher's point of view, Mr. X in class for he shall be of knowledge tree of the master, and while he and curious explore the world, get a lot of extracurricular knowledge. Talk to him and let a person relaxed and happy, and the most impressive is he speak perfect American English, fluent and natural, completely don't recognize this is a never had children out on China said the English. In his school, come to our school to support teaching two New York university graduates also highly of him, Mr. X also and two foreign teachers development the deep friendship. In short, Mr. X is a valuable young people, I also believe that he will create a more beautiful future.

For Mr. X in your university study, I have every confidence, he'll be with their own special in your university organization to take part in all kinds of activities, serious shoe all our courses of graduate.

This is probably, thank you for your time. If there are improving Suggestions please you also write, earned points to add cent thank you!