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Direction: For this part, you are required to write a short essay entitled Harmfulness of Fake ...

Direction: For this part, you are required to write a short essay entitled Harmfulness of Fake Products following the outline given below. You should write within 120 words.市场商品丰富，但假冒商品频现；假冒商品的危害应对假冒商品的措施。

Answer 1

Harmfulness of Fake Products As is known to all, China has undergone great changes in terms of products quality and variety over the last several decades. Nowadays, commodities and products of all kinds are sufficiently provided in the market. Meanwhile, a lot of fake products have appeared. Like worms that eat away the core of a good apple, fake products are threatening the well-being of individuals as well as our society. Fake products bring serious damages on our society. Consumers are robbed of their money and have to bear the consequence caused by fake products. For example, it is reported by the media that several dozens of people were poisoned to death by fake alcohol. Measures must be taken to ban the production of fake products. On the one hand, fake products must not be sold on the market, and strict laws should be made and enforced against fake producer, and those who sell fake products should be severely punished. On the other hand, consumers must learn how to protect themselves. Only with the joint effort of the whole society can we handle the problem properly.

试题分析：本书面表达是一篇提纲作文。提纲作文写作的时候注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。 【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如As is known to all，in terms of，as well as，be robbed of, dozens of , take measures to, On the other hand；还运用句型as引导的非限定性定语从句，only引导的倒装结构。并注意了句子的衔接如：Meanwhile，Although，and，For example等等。