Question

请教关于考研写作的问题，谢谢老师！

Answer 1

榜样作用
Undoubtedly, the painter aims at reminding us the importance of an exemplar in a society. As is known to us all, [that应该删掉，因为前面本身就是非限制性定语从句，加上that就没有主句了] an exemplar is a moral flag of a society to guide people to put to their actions [lead people’s actions]. By that, I mean, they set a good example for us through their actions and give some enlightenment to us to regulate our behaviors. Thousands of examples can be given. For instance, Lei Feng, a good solider of the People’s Liberation Army, used to do [不存在追溯过去的过去，不能用过去完成时态had done] lots of unselfish help to others in his life. And one of his famous proverbs is “A man’s life is limited, but there is no limit to serve [serving词性错误，此处应该用不定式作后置定语] the people. I will dedicate my limited life to the limitless job of serving the people.” What a great man he was!

注：guide 表示指导别人的学习、品行修养，它的内涵是避免走弯路或遇到危险；lead表示带领者走在前面，而把被带领者控制在自己的权威之下或处于秩序井然的状态中。

In my apprehension, we should follow the exemplars’ footsteps, such as [just like] Lei Feng’s [footsteps调整到前面] to do more selfless actions to contribute myself to our country’s development.

注：just like 表示“就像…那样”， such as 表示“像…这种的…” 。榜样的足迹不能就像雷锋的足迹那样，而是像雷锋的足迹那样的足迹

Answer 2

考研写作主要是买几本写作方面的模版书 通过分析历年真题尽可能地自己用模版书的现成语句组成一片新的模版 要用一个模版以不变应万变 例如 考研英语一般第一段都是陈述图中内容等 你就要写一个 大量描述性的语句 不管你哪篇文章你都这样开头只是在这段话之后再加一句和这幅图相关的语句例如上图主要描述了什么 ，这样总结后 不管出什么文章 基本上你只要自己写几句话 其他的都是固定背下来的 这样在考试中会为你省很多时间