Question

帮忙写个英语作文，高中水准。

作文要求：随着英语和网络的普及，一些英语词汇被夹杂于汉语表达中，如用hold表示“能对付、扛得住”用out表示“过时、陈旧”请针对该现象，根据以下要点写一篇英语短文。1该现象积极和消极的方面;2该现象背后反映了什么;3你是否接受这种表达及理由;注意：词数100字左右，

Answer 1

Nowadays , as English and Internet become more and more popular, many english words are mingled in Chinese expressions. For example, "hold" can be used to show " be able to deal with " or " bearable" .What's more, the meaning of "out" turns to be "outdated" or “obsolete”.
This phenomenon is not uncommon . It shows that the combination of Chinese and western culture.
We can see it from two aspects. Firstly ,it has advantages. Undoubtly , it makes our own culture richer. Secondly, it has disadvantages. In this way, both languages will be changed . The traditional grammars are changed unconsciously.
In my opinion, I accept it .It is not wrong. But I will learn English and Chinese respectively.

求赏分。赏分给我吧。如果字数还要多一点，回复我，我来改哦。

追问

字数有些多啦！还有句式有点复杂，简明点吧！让人读起来比较快速容易为好。