Question

紧急 这是我的英文自我介绍 请帮我改一下语病 谢谢大家

Good morning/afternoon/evening, my name is Riko. I am twenty years old.I am an university student in school.It is really a great honor to have this opportunity/chance to introduce myself。I am a character space bright girl.I relate to with classmate in the class harmonious, also relatively take pleasure in help others.I have lots of interest, such as , singing,seeing films, reading books and so on.I like to going shopping with some good friends over the weekend, being relax.I’m a Taurus. Some good Taurus traits are: broad-minded, loving, faithful. Bad traits are: bossy, patronizing. I’m a typical Taurus. I’m faithful but patronizing.This is me.Thank you !
这是中文
上午好/下午好/晚上好！我的名字叫renjingjie,我今年20岁。我是一名大学生，今天有机会进行自我介绍深感荣幸。我是个性格开朗的女孩.我在班里与同学关系融洽,也比较乐于助人.我有很多兴趣爱好，如唱歌、看电影、看书等。在周末我喜欢与一些好朋友去购物,放松心情.我属金牛座。金牛座的优点是心胸宽阔、有爱心，以及忠诚；缺点则是专横、自以为是。我就是典型的金牛座，忠诚却又自负.这就是我.谢谢!

Answer 1

Good morning/afternoon/evening, I am Riko , twenty years old.I am an university student .It is my honor to have this opportunity/chance to introduce myself.I am a open and extrovert girl.I get on well with my classmates in the class , always being ready to help others.I have lots of interests, such as , singing,movies, reading and so on.I like to going shopping with my good friends in the weekend,which can relax myself.I’m a Taurus,so I have the personality of being broad-minded, kingd, faithful. On the other hand,my bad sides lies in the bossy, patronizing characters. I’m a typical Taurus. I’m faithful but patronizing.This is me.Thank you !

Answer 2

an university student in school改为undergraduate
help改为helping
to going shopping改为to go shopping