Question

这是我的英语演讲稿，麻烦大家帮忙看看，提提意见与建议

Good afternoon，everyone！Happiness is considered very important in our life.So,today，I’m going to talk to you about happiness.HAPPINESS is a feeling that lights up your eyes, makes your steps light and makes you want to sing for no reason. When you are happy, the world feels like a better place. As the saying goes: When you smile, the world smiles with you; when you cry, you cry alone. Wearing a smile will make you more charming and help you to win lots of friends. A good mood always gives you hope, which makes trouble and problems easier to handle.In my opinion, happiness is rooted in optimistic attitude. In our daily life, we should face a lot of problems, which may lead to setbacks.The only way is right attitude and sparing no effort to overcome it then you can find happiness.All in all, happiness is very important to our life.Life is full of ups and downs.Face our life with smile,and we will be a happy man.

Answer 1

talk with you
makes you want to sing那句可以把makes 去掉，重复动词了
后面那句the world feels like 很奇怪，明白你想表达的意思，但是用英语这么说很奇怪，一般只有人feels like吧。可以换成the world seems to be a better place.
overcome them
其他感觉很好啊
祝你演讲成功！

Answer 2

还不错，不过有些语句不通顺，还要加以修改，加油！祝你取得好成绩！

Answer 3

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