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today is sunday,i didn't get up early as usually.in the morning after i finished my homework,i do some washing. then i telephoned one of ciassmate and invited himto see a film.and unfortunately,when we got to the cinema at 3:oo pm.we found all the tickets had sold out .then we went back to school and played the football.when we were about to go home,we saw our English teacher,Mr.wang coming into the school gate.He told us we have made great progress in English this term.He also suggested that we should read more and more and wrote more.We promised him thatwe would listen his advice

Answer 1

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Today is Sunday, I didn't get up early as (usually改成usual). In the morning after I finished my homework, I (do改成did) some washing. Then I telephoned one of my (classmate改成classmates) and invited him to see a film. (And改成But) unfortunately, when we got to the cinema at 3:oo pm. we found all the tickets had (加入been) sold out. Then we went back to school and played (去掉the) football. When we were about to go home, we saw our English teacher, Mr.wang (coming改成come) into the school gate. He told us we (have改成had) made great progress in English this term. He also suggested that we should read more and more and (wrote改成write) more. We promised him that we would listen (加入to) his advice.

Answer 2

Today is sunday,and I didn't get up early as usual( 固定搭配，像平常一样).In the morning i did some washing after finishing my homework. Then i telephoned one of my ciassmates and invited him to see a film. However, unfortunately,when we got to the cinema at 3:oo p.m,we found all the tickets had sold out . Then we went back to school and played football (play football 固定搭配，两者之间不加任何冠词).When we were about to go home,we saw our English teacher,Mr.wang, coming into the school gate.He told us we had made great progress in English this term.He also suggested that we should read and write more and more (前后一致). We promised him that we would take(listen to中国英语化) his advice .

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Answer 3

today is sunday,i didn't get up early as usual.in the morning after i finished my homework,i did some washing. then i telephoned one of ciassmates and invited him to see a film.but unfortunately,when we got to the cinema at 3:oo pm.we found all the tickets had sold out .then we went back to school and played football.when we were about to go home,we saw our English teacher,Mr.wang coming into the school gate.He told us we have made great progress in English this term.He also suggested that we should read more and more and write more.We promised him that we would listen to his advice

Answer 4

today is sunday,i didn't get up early as usually.in the morning after i finished my homework,i did some washing. then i telephoned one of ciassmates and invited him to see a film.and unfortunately,when we got to the cinema at 3:oo pm.we found all the tickets had sold out .then we went back to school and played the football.when we were about to go home,we saw our English teacher,Mr.wang coming into the school gate.He told us we have made great progress in English this term.He also suggested that we should read more and more and write more.We promised him that we would listen his advice.