Question

英语改错。。。

Dear David，
I‘ve learned from the internet that you are eagerly to make friends with a chinese to help you study Chinese and it’s culture 。I think it will be pleasure to be my friend。I‘m LI Hua ，a senior 3 student in Xiangyang. I am good at both English orchinese ，so I am sure I can be of a great help to you。WE can often write letters，sendE-mail 。phone each other or even chatting online ，
in this way you will know more about chinese and my English will get improve as well what do you like it?改错，说明每个错的原因详细点

Answer 1

Dear David，
I‘ve learned from the internet that you are eagerly(－eager;be eager to do sth,这里用形容词) to make friends with a(a删除，泛指中国人) chinese to help you study Chinese and it’s culture ．I think it will be pleasure to be my(-your;成为你的朋友) friend。I‘m LI Hua ，a senior 3 student in Xiangyang. I am good at both English or(-and;both.. and..;　either...or..固定搭配；)chinese ，so I am sure I can be of(of删除) a great help to you.We can often write letters，send E-mail ，phone each other or even chatting （－chat;和前面的时态统一，都用一般时；）online ．
in this way you will know more about chinese and my English will get improve （－improved;get sth done;get后在分词）as well what do you like it?

Answer 2

1.eagerly改成eager，这是形容某人的心情的，只能用形容词，不能用副词，故应把eagerly改成其形容词形式
2.friends改成friend，后面已经说明是要和一个中国人交朋友了，怎么可以用复数形式？
3.pleasure改成pleasant，pleasant意思是令人喜欢的，it will be +形容词+to do sth，而pleasure是名词，意为令人愉快的事。
4.both English or Chinese中的or改成and，both A and B是固定句式
5.E-mail改成E-mails，前文提及可常联系，所以发邮件应该不止一封邮件
6.get improv改成gets improved,英语能力是被提高而不可能是自己提高，故应用被动形式，另外谓语也必须改为第三人称所对应的形式。
7.最后一句修改一下。改为in this way you will know more about chinese and my English will gets improved as well.Do you like it?
另外，注意一下句子的首字母需大写的问题。