Question

请有能力的帮个忙，帮我看看这封信有没有什么问题，请指出来并帮忙改正，谢谢！急用！马上就要回信了。

Dera Emily,
Hello! My name is Shi Mingyue(石铭悦)，My English name is “Sophia”.I am a Chinese girl and I from China. I am twelve years old and I am a middle school student.I can speak English,but only a little.
My home is so ordinary ，but it so happy. I have a small family—My stepfather、My mother、My little brother and I.My mother is thirty-six years old,she is a giude.My stepfather is a worker. My father don’t live with My mother and I,because they’re divorce.But my father still love me, I love his,too.Maybe my home is to ordinary,but I think you don’t mind.Ha，My mother talk to me she like“Emily”this name,because she onced see a film—“Amelie from Montmartre”.I can't writing this letter so long,only a little,please excuse me，think you.
Can you answer my question？
1. What’your favourite food?
2. Can you eat Chinese food?
3. How old are you?
4. What’s your favourite colour?
5. Do you like Chinese?
Finally,can you sand a photo to me,please?
Friendly
Shi Mingyue
我又修改了一下，请帮我看看啊：5. Can you tell me your telephone number? My telephone number is 137****5366(Mobile) 25***28(Tel).【你能告诉我你的电话号码吗？我的电话号码是......(行动电话) .......（电话）】
6. What's the subject do you teaches in nativity?【你在Nativity（某学校名字）教的是什么科目？】
I like swimming best,but I can'swim.My favourite food is meet,noodles and vegetable.eI don'like hambuger,Coke and candy,because it's unheathy food. I like fruit too.My hobby it's sing and play the computer games.

Answer 1

1、I am a Chinese girl ,当然是from china 啊，不用加了吧，况且，只要用from China 就行了前面的and i 不用加，加了就是错的
2、My family is so ordinary ,but it is so interesting.
3.、giude没有这个词，你妈妈是什么职业？我可以帮你翻译一下
4、My father doesn't live with my mother and I, because they have divorced.
5、But my father loves me , and I love him,too
6、maybe my family is too ordinary , but I think you won't mind.
7、My mother told me that she liked "Emily",this name.
8、Thank you!

追问

我又修改了一下，请帮我看看啊：5. Can you tell me your telephone number? My telephone number is 137****5366(Mobile) 25***28(Tel).【你能告诉我你的电话号码吗？我的电话号码是......(行动电话) .......（电话）】
6. What's the subject do you teaches in nativity?【你在Nativity（某学校名字）教的是什么科目？】

追答

第6句把do去掉，其他就没问题了，祝你成功！

追问

I like swimming best,but I can'swim.My favourite food is meet,noodles and vegetable.I don'like hambuger,Coke and candy,because it's unheathy food. I like fruit too.My hobby it's sing and play the computer games.

追答

meat是肉的意思
don't like ...because they are unhealthy food
I like fruit, too.
My hobby is singing and playing computer games.

还不选我为最佳答案吗？

Answer 2

i am from china或者i came from china 缺少动词
but it is so happy 缺少动词is
介绍你的家庭成员的时候my m不用大写
live with my mum
i love him too 用宾格
my mum tell me she likes your name because。。。。。。。
once saw a film see是动词过去式是saw
do you eat chinese food 或do you like chinese food can表能力

希望我的回答对你有帮助

追问

I like swimming best,but I can'swim.My favourite food is meet,noodles and vegetable.I don'like hambuger,Coke and candy,because it's unheathy food. I like fruit too.My hobby it's sing and play the computer games.