Question

英语作文：My new year's day

Answer 1

Winter vacation is coming.We‘re happy to welcome the holidays.Usually,winter vacation is funny because Spring Festival is during the vacation.
Spring Festival is a excellent day for every Chinese,especially for children.During the festival,relatives go to visit each other and give presents to each other.then it‘s the happy moment for children,children are given some lucky money.
But i‘m not a child any longer.I want to makethe festival a little bit different. I plan to have a different day.I‘m going to sell some toys in the flower market.I will ask my friends to join me.If i earn some money,i‘ll buy some presents to my parents.Well,it‘s my turn to give back to my parents for their love.O(∩_∩)O，希望对你有帮助

Answer 2

My New Year's Day)
　　It’s the New Year's Day today. I got up very early! I heard the bird singing in the trees. After breakfast, my mum, my father and I went to the local park. Everything was beautiful there,
　　We saw many boats in the lake. Later on, we went to my grandfather’s home. There are many trees and some flowers.
　　At seven o’clock, we went home. It’s a happy day today

Answer 3

好吧，我想说，楼主如果是高中了的话就不要抄二楼的了。看第一遍就很明显有5个语法错误，两个语意不当。但也错误原因主要是没有背诵英语美句，靠语法知识自己造句，导致语言生硬没有深度，二楼息怒，我只是随便说说的