Question

求英语大神看看这句话有没有语法问题~

when i was young my parents worked in the big city, they left me to my grandma, grandma and i lived in the countryside. still till now, few people ever asked or cared about my study, so now i am very capable of doing things independently.

小时候我的父母到大城市打工，我和奶奶生活在农村，直到现在，也很少有人过问我的学习，因此我有着很强的独立做事的能力。

求看看语法是否正确~可、或者可否改进一下
大二以下水平勿扰谢谢

Answer 1

小时候我的父母到大城市打工，我和奶奶生活在农村，直到现在，也很少有人过问我的学习，因此我有着很强的独立做事的能力。

(1) When I was a small boy , My parents have gone to big cities for work . Both my grandmother and I have lived in the countryside till now , Very few people once asked me about my studies, which has contributed to the fact that I possess the strong abilities of dealing with things independently.

(2) My parents have gone to big cities to work since my childhood (I was so young), I was always taken care of by my grandmoter in the countryside . Up to now /So far, Few people care much about my studies . that is why I have been so strong in the aspect of solving the problems independently.

(3) My parents have both worked in big cities since I was a small boy , I have lived with my grandmother in the countryside , So far. few people has cared much about my studies, which has made it happen that I formed the strong capabilities of working on problems alone /by myself / on my own / independently.

(4) My parents worked in big cities during my childhood, I was left / entrusted / committed to my grandmother's care . Up to now, few people is mindful about my studies , that is why I am in high competence of dealing with various things independently / on my own /alone / by myself

Answer 2

when i was young, my parents worked in a big city。 they left me to my grandma,。my grandma and i have lived in the countryside since then. few people have ever cared about my study, so now i am very capable of doing things independently.

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Answer 3

they left me to my grandma, grandma and i lived in the countryside.这句话累赘，句意重复。改成 they left me to my grandma in the countryside. 希望能采用！我英语很好！

Answer 4

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