Question

这段英语谁帮我看一下语法语序对不对啊？？？

She is a very happy girl. But sometimes she is sad, beacause she fail the math test. If she can go to the movie, she's exciting. She thinks the math class is boring.

Answer 1

有错误啊!!而且表达也不是很好..要改进一下哦.....She is a very happy girl. But sometimes she feels sad for she fails the math test. If she could go to the movie, she would be excited. She thinks math classes are boring.
我来说明一下,在一段话中要尽量避免重复使用同一种表达方式,而句子中表示原因的语气并不强烈,所以不要用because,对于语气比较轻的用for来连接句子就可以了.在这里if 引导的最好使用虚拟语气,因为是一种假设而不是已经发生的事.数学课最好用math classes来统指.这样修改下来就比较好了.....希望你以后进步哦~~~~~

Answer 2

beacause she fail the math test
这里要用fails 单数加s
If she can go to the movie, she's exciting.
if 后面的从句一般不接can，就直接说
if she goes to the cinema (看电影用这个，不是go to the movie)
主将从现句式，所以：she'll be excited.（不是exciting,exciting是使……高兴，她自己高兴要用excited)

然后就没问题了

Answer 3

beacause she fail the math test
这里要用fails 单数加s
If she can go to the movie, she's exciting.
if 后面的从句一般不接can，就直接说
if she goes to the cinema (看电影用这个，不是go to the movie)
主将从现句式，所以：she'll be excited.（不是exciting,exciting是使……高兴，她自己高兴要用excited)

然后就没问题了

Answer 4

别的大家都改了,我觉得If she can go to the movie, she's exciting.这句改为She will be excited that she can go to the movies.更合适

Answer 5

不对哦