Question

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It was the first time that our parents had allowed us to come to the family's New Year's Eve party and we were very exciting.My uncle gives my cousins and me a bottle of wine,and said,"Now enjoy yourselves ,and dont get drunk !"I was very nervous and drank my wine very slow .I secretly thought that I was taking a big risk with my health and maybe with my whole future .I was only six year old at that time .My cousins were older ,one was seven and other was ten .Later my cousins had more and more wine .I was afraid of that I would be looked down upon ,so I had to keep up with him ,but I dhdn't want to destroy myself .I solved this problem by drinking grape juice and pretend it was wine .
改10和地方

Answer 1

exciting ---excited
gives---gave
and ---but
slow ---slowly
year---years
other前面加the
去掉of
him---them
pretend---pretending
只看出了这几个，短文改错应该有一句是划勾。

Answer 2

1.exciting ---excited
2.gives---gave
3.and ---but
4.slow ---slowly
5.把with改为of. take a risk of 是固定搭配。不能用with
6.year---years
7..other前面加the
8..去掉of
9.him---them
10.pretend---pretending

Answer 3

had allowed us to 改为 had to allow us